|Reviews for What if I Told You|
| whilewewereyetsinners chapter 1 . 3/25/2014
Wow. You made me cry. Like really cry, so I couldn't see the screen and needed multiple tissues. LOL I'm hoping you continued this under your own pen name- going to look. :)
| amanrocks112 chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
LMAF this is really funny i cant stop laughing you should do this again but cullens or Edwards Povs
| Depressionized Arianna chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
Are you planning on continueing this? I really hope so because that seemed more like the end of a chapter instead of a story. I would really like to read more to this.
| SVMlover1378 chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
Wow this is uch an amazing story. Heartbreaking and hilarious at the same time.
| Twihardtothecore chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
You absolutely have to do another chapter ASAP. PLEASE
| carlizzlestreetlight chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
really good one-shot! and i usually hate one-shots but this contest seemed interesting. i kind of cried reading it...poor bella :(((
| elizi02 chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
Awww,,.. Man, I wish you made this into a story! This is just so good! and sad... but man!
| PeaceLoveTwilight687 chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
Oh please tell me you are going to write more to this story! I would really like to know what happens now that she called them. Awesome work and hopefully we will read more soon! :)
| feelthewindxx chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
oh my gosh, no, you have to write more! I was sniffling at the end, too...gosh, that was really good!
| daphnie chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
I would love to read more of this.. A reunion may be.. Its so heartbreakingly beautiful
| Peace.Lovee.Edward chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
fuuuck... this was some messed up shit! Edward just sat there and listened to all of that and said nothing? ugggh, I hate NM Edward!
| bluevolvic chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
This seems more like a realistic take of Edwards absence in New Moon.I liked this very angst but captured the true emotions of a drunken you finished this or is there more? Thanks for sharing.
| EdwardsBloodType chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
This is so weird because I just learned about Post Secrets like two hours ago and then this rec was in my twitter feed. Creepy.
I burst into tears when she spoke to Rosalie. I just wish there woud have been a tiny bit more dialogue withEdward:( i was waiting for him just as much as Bella was.
| TheFaintHeart chapter 1 . 1/10/2011
I really enjoyed this...but feel slighty gypped at the ending...it doesn't feel resolved and the ending was almost rushed, but that's the point, right? Post Secrets are not there for resolution, they are there to get you to think about yourself and those around you.
You picked a really great secret and I am amazed how well it worked, sticking with the original plot lines of Twilight/New Moon.
The small interaction between Bella and Jasper was lovely. It's just like Bella to apologize for something that wasn't her fault.
I just wish there was more, or hope you have plans to continue, I'd love a PM (when the contest is over) if you plan to continue so I can get my resolution. Also, feel free to tell me to STFU about my desired resolution because you intended it to be a oneshot, I'll understand. ;D
I hope you do well in the contest.
| souriante chapter 1 . 1/10/2011
I'd love to see where this goes! Please consider continuing the story after the contest. Please, please, please!