|Reviews for Wind Up Dolls|
| DinAHLOO chapter 24 . 6/3/2013
I just knew the story was at least a little inspired by Water for Elephants. Just knew it! I dont what to say, I mean, I've read your story Somebody and i can't choose a favorite. I love the way you put everything in it's perfect place, and that you have a crazy amazing writing style. I love it. You've found yourself another story favorite.
| Lady Rini chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
I have to say I have never read a Naruto story that has kept me on the edge of my seat in a while. This had so many twist and turns and I usually don't like that but i enjoyed this story alot. Great story.
| sadistic dreamkiller chapter 24 . 3/12/2013
Damn. This was an amazing not your typical run of the mill story. I say that in earnest, and it was a refreshing break from all the predictable stories I've been sifting through.
It's a different take on things and the relationships aren't as defined so much by the actual Naruto series. You know, in the way that since Naruto and Sasuke were "bestfriends" in there, they didn't have to be here. These are the kind so AUs I've been searching for, and in this I've found one well-written example. :D You managed to create a world with them and pit the characters against things realistically. They may not be hardline in character but I definitely could see them actually doing what they did and no one was OOC. Even Orochimaru. Definitely Orochimaru, lol
Aaaand... your story's over. I loved it. It's filled with love and its details thought of, as all stories should be (but sadly aren't). :) Kudos to the quality of your storytelling, and hope you write more.
| sadistic dreamkiller chapter 10 . 3/10/2013
Okay. I was supposed to review at the very end (finished or not), but I just had to leave another feedback here.
ITAKOOOOOOOOOOOONNNN! -squeals shrilly- Goddamnit, I was so surprised. It's a little niggle just there in the corner but DAMN there's ItachixKonan.
-breathes deeply- Okay. I'll behave now. And leave you alone until I finish the story. But seriously, this is the shit man, the story is so cool and unique. :D
| Hevvie-chanxx chapter 2 . 2/18/2013
omg omg omg this is absoloutly awesome -does a creepy guy pose-
| Hevvie-chanxx chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
awww dont make hinata die who will naruto love ! anway great start
| Epic Otaku Cherry chapter 24 . 12/2/2012
This is great. And I love the way you portrayed the SasuSaku-ness, though I'd personally enjoy that they ended up together sometime or something, but this is still incredible.
Oh, and I've never reviewed a story this many times. Twice was the max. If even.
This is my what, my 5th?
Next: Read Somebody or another one of your stories.
| Epic Otaku Cherry chapter 23 . 12/2/2012
Loved the ending. :)
Though I'm a little sad about Neji, Tenten, and Kiba, still on the streets. It makes sense, but I still feel sad for them. And Tayuya is dead right?
Do Ino and Sakura ever speak or something again? I felt they had too strong of a connection for them to never speak again...
| Epic Otaku Cherry chapter 19 . 12/2/2012
Alright, about this chapter, I remembered a conclusion I made a long time ago about Sasuke, and I wish I say to Sakura in this chapter.
"Sasuke is destructive. To himself, and even others sometimes. Be careful."
Is this quality what made Karin leave him?
| Epic Otaku Cherry chapter 17 . 12/2/2012
Phew! I was wondering who Sasuke's stepmother was, and all that I could think of was Kurenai, and I was kindasorta horrified.
I was relieved to find out it was a Fem!Orochimaru.
A little disgusted, but I see the sense it makes, and like that WAY better than Kurenai.
| Epic Otaku Cherry chapter 14 . 12/2/2012
I reviewed the last chapter, but I forgot to mention I really like your taste in music.
MCR...Breaking Benjamin...loving you even more! And I'll make sure to check out Somebody. :)
And, seriously, this story should have at least like 1K reviews. 15-something isn't right.
| Epic Otaku Cherry chapter 13 . 12/2/2012
Your story is definitely one of the best stories I have read.
Great writing style, kinda poetic, and expressive.
Great story. No "Flowers and Bunnies" world, the REAL world and a new view in outlook.
I can't think of any other words to express my love for your story.
I wish ffn had an All-Time Favorite Authors and Stories button, because people like you and your stories don't belong in the regular Favorites. Few other authors and stories are on that list.
I decided to review this chapter instead of the last because Ino's words at the end of the chapter brought a tear or two to my eyes, which is about as close to crying as I'll ever get.
I rarely review stories. I'm lazy; it's also too much of a PITA sometimes because I'm reading fanfiction on my iPod 99% of the time. So I usually have to review from there.
Let me know if you write a book. A novel.
I'll be the first to read it.
Your new...fan? No. That would isn't good enough. ,
Epic Otaku Cherry.
| Wash in with WAVES chapter 15 . 6/6/2012
kiss! and cuddle! so yeah reviewing...
this story makes my heart break, like all your other amazing stories! It's so tragic and i love your writing style! keep up the good work
| a1lone1bird1lucia chapter 24 . 4/20/2012
this story was sad and a little bit messed up in some places, but i couldn't stop reading it. i don't know what i was looking for in the end but i was for some reason a little dissapointed. i think that i was hoping for sasuke to say sorry to sakura instead of breaking up with her. your writing style is very vague and a little dark (a lot dark in some places) and it felt like i was reading poetry. over all i normally would'nt read something like this but it was very deep and it pulled me in
| A.Rose.Love chapter 24 . 4/12/2012
This was beautiful. Gritty, honest, hurtful, but beautiful none the less.
Uhm. I love your writing style. It's different than most of the writing I've read. I also like this idea for a story. It's very original and also much different than the 'norm' on this site.
I'm completely in awe of this. It really was beautiful. I like how you developed Sakura's character from the beginning. Kind of being weak but developing into a strong person as she went through all of these things and saw what she saw. I also can appreciate Sasuke's back story, even though the abusive part of his character made me sad/mad.
I have to say that my favorite chapter was the one where Sakura was in Sasuke's trailer. I loved loved loved how you described the Christmas lights and in turn described her as a bloom.
The beginning, with Sakura and Naruto being homeless really touched me. It makes me appreciate the things I have.
I also liked how Sakura saw peoples' faces kind of melt together. It was a good indication of her mental state/ how she viewed the world. Also that Sasuke's face 'melted' at one point kind of showed that they weren't perfect for each other.
I am also in awe of the way you applied the characters from the show and sprinkled them throughout the story. Like Karin waiting for the train, Orochimaru being Sasuke's stepmom and Obito being Kakashi's son. I totally appreciated this. I love when people can integrate all the characters into a story.
I would have liked to see more interaction at the very beginning between Hinata and Naruto before she died, however I understand it was needed/ vital for the story in general. I also liked this version of Ino. A lot of people make her out to be this big bitch in Fanfiction so I really liked her being kind of like a big sister.
I also liked (I liked this fic so much lol) that Naruto was there for her. I was kind of rooting for him at the end, because he represented much more (to me personally) of a hopefully/ happy future than Sasuke did. But Sasuke did save her that one time. But yea, She could have ended up with either of them.
Overall, I love this. Good job, honestly it was a pleasure to read :)