|Reviews for First Christmas|
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 1 . 5/21
The truly amazing part about the Christmas star
is that it remained over the family, and visible
24/7 while the Wise Men (never numbered) were
searching...and contrary to popular belief, the
Christ Child was more along the lines of 2 or 3 by
the time they tracked him down. Pretty amazing,
isn't it? I think God trapped a comet in some sort
of geo-synchronous orbit. Only thing that remotely
makes sense. At least, to HUMAN understanding.
Our wisdom IS as foolishness, so...
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/7/2015
This is great as were the 2 parts to getting caught and niagra trip. Thank you. I love your writing and plan to read all you works.
| Kksmum chapter 1 . 2/4/2014
| jeangary28 chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
awesome story really sweet glad that Edward and Bella r awesome parents
| Rebadams7 chapter 1 . 12/7/2011
What a fine take for a winters night
| LezCullen chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
This was a wonderful heart warming christmas story. I love the way you have Edward reflect!
| Raum chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
I'm glad that finally Edward and Bella got their first Christmas together...and what a special one!
| denninelli chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
| ohtobeyoung chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
Aww so beautiful.
| favludo chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
I didnt want to read this in case it contained Jacob with Ren as Im so not a fan of reading anything with that pairing however I am so glad I did decide to read after all. What a beautiful first Bella-Edward-Ren Christmas story! And thats great you write Bella being able to feed Ren too, it was sad she never got to experience that in the books. Thanks for posting :)
| capitaine-awesome chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
Loved it of course, btw... the christmas star really happened. scientifically proven BUT it wasn't a star, it was the reflection of the planet venus onto earth.
| Janiriki chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
| ewatt.marion chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Delightful :) I am still trying to catch up on your stories though.
| jeasterl chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
great as all your stories
just sitting here it is so cold must have gotten below 60 this morning (hey stop throwing things) hope you had a good Christmas and will keep giving us the presents of your writing
| Camilla10 chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
So, another fast forward. Wondrful lemonade, BUT
Is vampire Bella nursing her daughter? with what? Don't tell me a vampire can have milk! You ll' have to explain this quite extensively when the time comes.
And, if vampires bite each other every time they have heated sex, at the end Bella and Edward would be more scarred than Jasper! Or not? And why not?