|Reviews for First Kiss|
| MusicLover333 chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
I like it, it kind of shows that Bellatrix was a bit crazy even when she was younger. (:
| Smayz chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
Hahaha, I love Cissy's reaction.
| Tani Smiles chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
I think this was really good. Both Bellatrix and Narcissa were very in character so that was good and the idea here was a very creative one. There were a few mistakes (spelling/grammar) although I think a few may have been typos.
Oh, this is a bit off topic, but ignore that reviewer Lilliana, she's been flaming a whole slew of stories and I don't think she's read even one of them.
So, anyways... good story, I really enjoyed reading it. Keep writing D
| Lilliana Gabriella chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
Omfg this is the worst story I ever read. I am in hysterics over it. Pls tell me you are kidding. If you are serious you must be a retard or I am concerned for any future generations.
| sidex chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
bellatrix was in-character. but there were some grammar errors and sentence fragments. besides that, this was good. keep writing! :D