|Reviews for Love at McDonalds|
| CommanderLibra chapter 3 . 2/27/2013
THIS. IS. CUTE
| ROTG Shipper chapter 3 . 4/29/2012
| Chocolate devil chapter 3 . 1/22/2012
this is soooo sweet.
| wierdo chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
you should make a barney chiron slash
| Lily Amy Jones chapter 3 . 2/12/2011
the whole story was just amazing! plus your write about the whole most gods being bi thing!
| YourThirstyAce chapter 3 . 1/5/2011
I love how they act so lovey-dovey with each other...
| erosian chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Really good, I just had one problem...
They seem a little to girl-like, I think you should write them a little more manly, they are heroes after all...
But that's just a suggestion, and other than that, i loved the story, very well written.
| hades child 365 chapter 3 . 12/29/2010
i totally mean it!
hooray! i think annabeth should call her kids: amanda ethan!lol
from, hades child 365! XD
p.s. i love converse
| Ruler of Elysium chapter 3 . 12/29/2010
Keeping up appearances. . .
It's soo sweet, but I have one tiny criticism you spell Zeus 'Zues' and I'm very OCD about spelling. .
But it's an amazing piece of humorous fiction, write more so I can annoy you!
| Cookie Puppy chapter 2 . 12/29/2010
A hungry Percy is an angry Percy. ;)
| AgitoHex chapter 3 . 12/29/2010
Oh geez this is so gay...i don't like this... Naah kidding...
I love your story! How often you can read a sweet couple as these two, they're lovely, and well i actually haven't read the third chap, but it's kinda late (or early, depending the POV) but i promise i'll read it tomorrow...
I'm so whith you on thw mythology thing-y...and we already know there are 'people' who can't use the logic once in their lives.
Hope you didn't get mad for my joke about your story, i totally love it, and i'm also hoping for a chap 4, even if i haven't read the third one...
And what else...what else...naah i thnk that all for today, but i'll comment again as soon as i read the third chap...
Good luck and have a nice day, evening, night, afternoon, or whatever it is when you read this...geez i'm geeting a little dizzy/sleepy...
| erosian chapter 3 . 12/28/2010
I loved it, i thought it was hilarious when Aphrodite kept slapping Luke! it was really well written, and not at all cheesy or predictable, you are really awesomely talented! update
| hades child 365 chapter 2 . 12/28/2010
that was probobly the best luke and percy fan fic in the world!ever!
what was anabeth gonna name her kids? XD
| erosian chapter 2 . 12/27/2010
LMAO! these are hilarious, and sweet and fluffy :P love it! keep writing!
| ILY gurl chapter 2 . 12/27/2010
okay so this story was great IL it but I bin lukin 4 an annabeth/silena 1 nd I wud really luv 1 since I've only red 1 plz try it I wud luv u 4 ever