Reviews for Love at McDonalds
CommanderLibra chapter 3 . 2/27/2013
ROTG Shipper chapter 3 . 4/29/2012
Update :D
Chocolate devil chapter 3 . 1/22/2012
this is soooo sweet.
wierdo chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
you should make a barney chiron slash
Lily Amy Jones chapter 3 . 2/12/2011
the whole story was just amazing! plus your write about the whole most gods being bi thing!
YourThirstyAce chapter 3 . 1/5/2011
I love how they act so lovey-dovey with each other...
erosian chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Really good, I just had one problem...

They seem a little to girl-like, I think you should write them a little more manly, they are heroes after all...

But that's just a suggestion, and other than that, i loved the story, very well written.

Update soon.
hades child 365 chapter 3 . 12/29/2010
i totally mean it!



hooray! i think annabeth should call her kids: amanda ethan!lol

from, hades child 365! XD

p.s. i love converse
Ruler of Elysium chapter 3 . 12/29/2010
Keeping up appearances. . .

It's soo sweet, but I have one tiny criticism you spell Zeus 'Zues' and I'm very OCD about spelling. .

But it's an amazing piece of humorous fiction, write more so I can annoy you!
Cookie Puppy chapter 2 . 12/29/2010
A hungry Percy is an angry Percy. ;)
AgitoHex chapter 3 . 12/29/2010
Oh geez this is so gay...i don't like this... Naah kidding...

I love your story! How often you can read a sweet couple as these two, they're lovely, and well i actually haven't read the third chap, but it's kinda late (or early, depending the POV) but i promise i'll read it tomorrow...

I'm so whith you on thw mythology thing-y...and we already know there are 'people' who can't use the logic once in their lives.

Hope you didn't get mad for my joke about your story, i totally love it, and i'm also hoping for a chap 4, even if i haven't read the third one...

And what else...what else...naah i thnk that all for today, but i'll comment again as soon as i read the third chap...

Good luck and have a nice day, evening, night, afternoon, or whatever it is when you read this...geez i'm geeting a little dizzy/sleepy...

erosian chapter 3 . 12/28/2010
I loved it, i thought it was hilarious when Aphrodite kept slapping Luke! it was really well written, and not at all cheesy or predictable, you are really awesomely talented! update

hades child 365 chapter 2 . 12/28/2010
love it!


that was probobly the best luke and percy fan fic in the world!ever!

what was anabeth gonna name her kids? XD
erosian chapter 2 . 12/27/2010
LMAO! these are hilarious, and sweet and fluffy :P love it! keep writing!
ILY gurl chapter 2 . 12/27/2010
okay so this story was great IL it but I bin lukin 4 an annabeth/silena 1 nd I wud really luv 1 since I've only red 1 plz try it I wud luv u 4 ever
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