Reviews for Guardian of Vegetasei
Guest chapter 10 . 8/21
Please finish this story. I have always been checking in to see if u had uploaded a new chapter for a few years now hope u haven't given up on writing u r really good at it!
Two Evil Carrots chapter 10 . 6/27
I just wanna say, but I REALLY love this fic! It has a unique plot I've never seen before, the grammar is great, and you portrayal of Vegeta and the new Saiyan race is just something I'm really impressed with. There probably won't be any updates for a long time, and I'm not sure if you're even working on this anymore, but it'd be amazing to see this masterpiece completed.
Rossy-Apac chapter 10 . 6/14
No abandones la historia esta muy buena
Kakurosu chapter 10 . 3/22
i hope there will be more chapters in the future
it is a really good fanfic
Aleaster chapter 10 . 1/7
It's hard to keep posting, completely understand. I quite like this chapter and this story overall. It's very high quality, with quite an interesting premise.
WWingWisher chapter 10 . 12/6/2014
MOTHERFUCKER. I missed your story SOOO much! I haven't reviewed in never because of life, same in your situation in writing/posting. I love this story though, Vegeta really showing his lonely aspect in life. And I think that girl had a crush on him. Ae, how cute! You aren't Bulma though, sor-ree. But her hairs turn white? Cool...
SkillzR3solve89 chapter 1 . 11/17/2014
where did you get the picture
Mr.Son chapter 10 . 10/1/2014
Please continue, it's a great story
Rapder chapter 10 . 9/24/2014
Lol... Unofficial hiatus... Life is always more important than updating... This is like, I don't know the most intriguing story for me, and the writing good quality, one can always learn... Hope some updates come soon... Good luck with life...
AFanAddict-Guest chapter 10 . 9/23/2014
I think itd be hilarious if vegeta recreated the legend of the super saiyan (train a saiyan to be one every thousand years). Of course its been about 500 years so...
aFanAddict chapter 7 . 9/23/2014
Ive said it before but i think ol veggie here should try and obtain SSJ3... And a teleportation technique. Could be useful.

Does his lookout also come with a Time Chamber? Or was that an earth thing only?
aFanAddict chapter 2 . 9/23/2014
The love i have for this story everytime! Its boundless
Dino-Rogue chapter 6 . 8/18/2014
"Saiyans spoke better with their fists than their lips." Oh, got that right. Ask their wives and their human friends...

Aww, nice chapter! So sweet! Nice time-stretch for Vegeta Jr., as well!

"Sometimes we have to do things we don't want to do." Oh, Vegeta! Hmph, Goku had better, better live up to his promise!

Lovely chappie!
Dino-Rogue chapter 5 . 8/17/2014
Ah, there we go! Vegeta, whether he had meant to or not, did something for Goku by having him see Raditz again, and Goku helped Vegeta with rebuilding his Lookout, and now, he's about to cheer his lonely friend up... superb!

Hahaha! Vegeta definitely needs a genie... or MRS. Brief!

Wow, his conversation with Raditz really brought out the kami/guardian in him, I see!

Aww, Goku really did miss his prince, his rival, his comrade, his Saiyan brother... his friend.

Oh my, home-building again, Goku? At least this time around, you got better results; you wouldn't wanna anger Vegeta, unlike the much more forgiving King Kai...

"He was ready to move 'one'." You mean, 'move on'? Hmm...

Actually, I like to believe Vegeta accepted being one of the good guys after the whole Buu thing and he received his halo, along with his new life! Unexpected for him, but so, so right.

Excellent job, as always! Oh, and "Rediscovering Honor" is awesome, as well! Love it! Have yet to finish the whole thing, but yeah...

Cupcakes? Mmmm, you have a sweet job... :)
Dino-Rogue chapter 4 . 8/17/2014
Haha! Supreme Kai didn't heal them all the way because he was too mad... hahaha! And Vegeta, what do you mean 'mad about something'? You mean 'someone', particularly a certain guardian we all know and love... :) your dedication to this task is so ssweet, though, admit it. Hehehehe!

"His left food slid back as he sank into his fighting stance." ..Hehehehe! You mean, 'left foot'!

Ah, the strength of Goku, the smarts of Vegeta. Goku's brawn, Vegeta's brains. See? That's why I love Vegeto!

Hahaha! Excellent chapter! Goose eggs that make even Vegeta's eyes water, Super Saiyan 4-style storms... seems Goku and Vegeta are making good on Vegeta's suggestion of using an entire planet for an arena, to poor Supreme Kai's chagrin! Haha! Poor Kai, dealing with Saiyans can only mean stress... but at least it's stress with the best!

I am really enjoying this story, thanks to you! Please, keep up the awesome work! Thank you for writing this!
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