Reviews for Guardian of Vegetasei
Yung Warrior chapter 10 . 10/17
This fic epitomizes old-school DBZ, I love it. Your characterizations are very good, and Vegeta's wistfulness is very powerful and poignant. Great work on making the character even more relatable than he already was. I hope you continue writing someday.
Lord Kratos chapter 10 . 10/6
This story was nothing short but FANTASTIC. I loved how you portrayed Vegeta to be the "Kami" of new Planet Vegeta while utilizing the power scaling's up to GT (Not enough Super Saiyan 4's anymore in fan fiction). You've managed to keep Vegeta pretty close to canon while giving him enough character growth to make him realistically more humble. Ultimately I have absolutely no complaints in this story and I hope that you may feel like continuing this story to the very end one day. #Salute...
Guest chapter 10 . 8/21
Please finish this story. I have always been checking in to see if u had uploaded a new chapter for a few years now hope u haven't given up on writing u r really good at it!
Two Evil Carrots chapter 10 . 6/27
I just wanna say, but I REALLY love this fic! It has a unique plot I've never seen before, the grammar is great, and you portrayal of Vegeta and the new Saiyan race is just something I'm really impressed with. There probably won't be any updates for a long time, and I'm not sure if you're even working on this anymore, but it'd be amazing to see this masterpiece completed.
Rossy-Apac chapter 10 . 6/14
No abandones la historia esta muy buena
Kakurosu chapter 10 . 3/22
i hope there will be more chapters in the future
it is a really good fanfic
Aleaster chapter 10 . 1/7
It's hard to keep posting, completely understand. I quite like this chapter and this story overall. It's very high quality, with quite an interesting premise.
WWingWisher chapter 10 . 12/6/2014
MOTHERFUCKER. I missed your story SOOO much! I haven't reviewed in never because of life, same in your situation in writing/posting. I love this story though, Vegeta really showing his lonely aspect in life. And I think that girl had a crush on him. Ae, how cute! You aren't Bulma though, sor-ree. But her hairs turn white? Cool...
SkillzR3solve89 chapter 1 . 11/17/2014
where did you get the picture
Mr.Son chapter 10 . 10/1/2014
Please continue, it's a great story
Rapder chapter 10 . 9/24/2014
Lol... Unofficial hiatus... Life is always more important than updating... This is like, I don't know the most intriguing story for me, and the writing good quality, one can always learn... Hope some updates come soon... Good luck with life...
AFanAddict-Guest chapter 10 . 9/23/2014
I think itd be hilarious if vegeta recreated the legend of the super saiyan (train a saiyan to be one every thousand years). Of course its been about 500 years so...
aFanAddict chapter 7 . 9/23/2014
Ive said it before but i think ol veggie here should try and obtain SSJ3... And a teleportation technique. Could be useful.

Does his lookout also come with a Time Chamber? Or was that an earth thing only?
aFanAddict chapter 2 . 9/23/2014
The love i have for this story everytime! Its boundless
Dino-Rogue chapter 6 . 8/18/2014
"Saiyans spoke better with their fists than their lips." Oh, got that right. Ask their wives and their human friends...

Aww, nice chapter! So sweet! Nice time-stretch for Vegeta Jr., as well!

"Sometimes we have to do things we don't want to do." Oh, Vegeta! Hmph, Goku had better, better live up to his promise!

Lovely chappie!
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