|Reviews for Never Been Kissed: What If|
| Guest chapter 9 . 9/15/2013
love the song at the end, kurt's so cute.
| LolaKennet chapter 7 . 8/23/2013
Oooh,it's really awesome to read the part of Kurtofsky's singing when I know how the song sounds:D That's one of my favourite from TDG, and it suits guys pretty well! Thank you for your writing of such exiting story. Do I love it? Hell yeah!
P.s. sorry for my strange review and bad English, I've been learning it not so long.
P.s.s. you're very talent person:)
| Guest chapter 16 . 11/9/2012
about your dad... I'm sorry! It's so unfair, isn't baby?
| Guest chapter 13 . 11/9/2012
WOW! just... WOW!
| Guest chapter 7 . 11/9/2012
It's soooooooooo hot!
| Guest chapter 5 . 11/9/2012
excellent music's choice
Poison is perfect!
Poor Kurt LOL
| Bellatokio chapter 2 . 11/9/2012
I love kurtofsky!
Your fic is great!
| codiroo chapter 23 . 10/22/2012
Really loved this story! You did a great job, especially with all the crazy relationships! Your Kurt and Dave were amazing, so glad I read this!
| Guest chapter 23 . 9/29/2012
LOL. Loved the story...mildly horrified by the Blaine/Sue & Rachel/Jacob thing but I really loved the story.
| Mya Uzo chapter 10 . 8/11/2012
Lmao. Tina is hilarious.
| OurEchoes chapter 23 . 8/8/2012
Not going to lie, this story was okay in some parts, good in others, and horrid in a few others. I liked it, over all, but I think the ending was really corny and didn't match the characters or the story. I liked the sex parts (not for just smut), because they often times felt somewhat romantic towards the end. Often times though, Dave came off as a rapist. I'm sorry but if a guy pursued me and dry humped after ONE date, no matter how close we were, I'd feel violated, and with their history I'd be petrified. The beginning felt more believable, but as the story progressed I felt confused by both the time lapse between chapters and the over all progress of their relationship. Sometimes things felt rushed or sudden. I liked your song choices on all accounts, but felt that a lot of characters were out of such. Sam and Finn seemed unrealistic, even though adorable, and I feel like having Azimio turn out to be gay felt like a cop out to make him seem more likeable. Sorry, it just didn't seem to work for me. I liked your writing style, and I loved the songs you introduced me to, but I feel you didn't have a good enough grasp of the characters or their personalities. I do applaud you for a good enough read. I think you have good potential as a writer, even if I am reading this story so long after it's release, and I think you could actually write a very good fanfic if you didn't seem to hold onto the whole "seme and uke" thing. In all honesty, as a gay teen, that isn't realistic either. I have had girlfriends who were my equal, not the "man", and most of the time find my self attracted to other femme lesbians and not butch girls. I think I understand Blaine's explanation of that, but it just felt like the wrong way to word it. Not everyone is a top or a bottom. Anyways, I still liked the story even with my obvious critiques. So thanks c:
| hanakisa chapter 23 . 7/4/2012
Amazing! simply amazing! I pulled an all nighter to read this and I am glad I did! *yawn* now I'm gonna go pass out!
| hanakisa chapter 7 . 7/4/2012
Just had to send a review on this chapter! I loved it! I totally predicted the song too! As soon as they said they had to turn it into a duet and it described them I though 'Oh they should do I Hate Everything About you by Three Days Grace' and sure enough they did! XD Awesome!
| Guest chapter 23 . 6/29/2012
Hi umm i love the story but i am really suprised that Blaine got with sue isnt she like 50 just a thought i meen i dont mind the age difference that much its just that Blaine would not belong to sue... But that is my thought and that was really short part so it really didnt matter so great job and sorry for the mistakes i am on the phone :) i got the gift
| x.keepingthemoon.x chapter 23 . 3/10/2012
awww, thanks for a great story!