|Reviews for The Human Species|
| seankaed chapter 111 . 3/10
Just another amazing chapter.
| EternalSnowMan chapter 111 . 3/9
Hi there! I have been following your story for a while on , but I do not have an account, so I didn't say anything. Anyways, once a started reading on , I found you, so I just wanted to say that this is a great story, probably my second favorite fanfiction, only behind Dark Amphithere's famous Total Pokemon Island. Continue to update, and I just wanna say, great job with the story and keep up the good work.
| Rediamond chapter 111 . 2/16
'Sup. After however long it's been, I am back. Full confession: I read the last two chapters at the same time to catch back up. So I knew when reading Chapter 110 that the title of Chapter 111 was "deadly demonic entity." That meant I was reading the whole chapter expecting a, well, deadly demonic entity to show up at the end. Or in this chapter. What I got was a GSC mythos joke and a T-shirt, except the T-shirt never arrived.
Anyway, the last two chapters really showed a lot of one of the best parts of the fic: mythos jokes in general. Between speculation on just how creepy the game's protagonist would be with breeding Pokemon and vitamins to random jokes about GSC Whi-
Sorry there, had a brief PTSD blackout. Where was I?
Oh, right. Good mythos humor is good.
Onto more relevant stuff, did the other two [s]Ghosts of Christmas[/s] Champions ever actually deliver? If so, was it just skipped for not being important enough? Or are they coming back in the future?
On a related note, the Champions appearing was kind of... anti-climatic. I can't really tell if the work is trying to build up to the x-teenth climax now and just taking a breather or if this is a really long epilogue wrapping up loose ends. Lugia's visit, Mewtwo and Silver lurking in the background, and even Zerobi's comments implying that 'this' is not yet done suggest it is still building. But the low-key visit of the Champions, a dozen chapters of nothing, Mew's death and a comment I saw on Serebii suggest otherwise. Are the former clues just a symptom of the Kudzu Plot the work has sort of developed? Either way, the new chapters are interesting, but if there is no major conflict resolution left it just feels like it's dragging on a little at the end.
Also, this chapter puts a whole new take on GSC introducing both Pokemon gender and friendship. Just saying.
| darrelodin chapter 111 . 2/15
Huh. That was an interesting chapter. Really liking the dynamic between the two of them.
| RushedFast chapter 111 . 2/14
Amazing quote, "No disease affects the dead, not even love."
A little dazed at the moment, but I enjoyed it.
| OseanSoldier chapter 111 . 2/14
Great chapter yet again, not much happens but it was quite humorous there at the start. Zoroark's and Lucario's conversation/debate was quite interesting. Not much else to comment on, so I will just leave it at that. Amazing job as always.
| Ozymandeos chapter 111 . 2/14
Wait... he didn't talk to the other two?
| SirCreepington9th chapter 111 . 2/14
Laughing at Lucario's fear: You bitch.
Keeping Lucario from drinking beer: MOTHERFUCKER!
| unknown to all chapter 110 . 2/12
Do you know what would be really REALLY funny, lucario/ethan is supposed to marry torana on the same day that he is supposed to marry rukario. (the other female lucario). THAT BE AWESOME! and very painful for lucario/ethan
| RushedFast chapter 110 . 2/10
I don't think I've given a review for 2014 yet, but I guess the 2 chapters had me laughing internally.
That reference to ingame breeding. It would definitely be something that Brendan would bring up of. What a character.
Prinplup's reaction is so disheartening D:
I wonder if she could ever forgive Lucario, even with whatever she's experienced. These "forgotten" characters are the ones that I like more so than the regulars cause there's just so much you can pull from them before they're gone.
| Zowkaii chapter 110 . 2/10
Hey, you used that one guy's suggestion. Cool! I guess this could work, Lucario and Blaziken both share the Field egg group...
| Guest chapter 110 . 2/9
Yeah! You used my idea! Or atleast part of it. This chapter was really nice. Keep up the good work!
| darrelodin chapter 110 . 2/9
I'm thoroughly creeped out now. But it is what people do when playing the games, eh?
Glad to see an update!
| Shadow the DeathWarrior chapter 110 . 2/8
Ouch, that kick Lucario received has got to hurt a lot
| OseanSoldier chapter 110 . 2/8
It has been too long, way too long. But better wait and have a great chapter like this than shorter periods with less quality chapters.
I thought that was how Piplup/Prinplup would respond to Lucario. That proved to be an interesting confrontation. I cannot imagine the pain Lucario went though with that one kick. That and what Brendan wants from him... that man has got to be first class crazy...
Anyways, great job yet again and I look forward to your next chapter whenever it may come out.