|Reviews for Immortal Beloved|
| VryUnique chapter 16 . 2/18/2020
Thanks for the story. I enjoyed it.
| VryUnique chapter 10 . 2/18/2020
From one chapter to the next Garrett had no idea who the Volturi were to knowing more than Bella. Made no sense.
| jk chapter 10 . 3/12/2017
Edward seems like a dick that doesn't really care about bella, I kinda feel like she should just find someone else. Garrett has a mate and he seems to want to sleep with bella anyway...so it would seem that even though bella is "mated" she could still find someone else...maybe that's why Edward seems to have no problem staying with the volturri. maybe he has a harem there so he doesn't really want to leave.
| jk chapter 14 . 8/5/2016
why are the chapters so fucked up?
Edward was taken "Again"?
if the chapters where in order then it would be clear...this is really fucking irritating
| jk chapter 13 . 8/5/2016
is it just me or are the chapters out of order...or do you do that on purpose? and if you do...you should fucking stop lol
| jk chapter 10 . 8/5/2016
I really don't get why bella would run to volturi without even practicing her shield...what a fucking idiot
| jk chapter 4 . 8/5/2016
what the fuck has he become?hes what with the volturi/...why the fuck cant he have his mate with him?
hes drinking animal blood so its not like hes some kind of monster now/I'm confused..is he just a asshole, ditching bella?
| Siobhan Whitlock chapter 16 . 2/17/2016
OMG I cried! Wow, powerful and so captivating! I love it!
| FicSisters chapter 1 . 5/22/2015
We are delighted to recommend this story today at The International House of FanFic.
Thanks to FluffyLiz for sharing her love.
| brenda.warren.1257 chapter 16 . 1/11/2015
THIS STORY HAS BEEN INTERESTING, CONFUSSION AND DOWN RIGHT SAD BUT IUNDERSTAND BITS AND PIECES DID THIS REALLY HAPPEN BECAUSE A COWARD WANTED POWER HE COUDNT POSSES HISSELF SO HE STOLEOTHERS TO MAKE HE FEEL BIG PWERFUL AND IMPOTANT? WELL HE WAS NONE OF THOSE SHAME THERE WASNT MORE THEY COULD DO TO HIM. BUT HE IS GONE N THEY CAN BE HAPPY FOR EVER. THANK YOU
| brenda.warren.1257 chapter 15 . 1/11/2015
HOW CAN YOU SAY THATHERE IS SO UCH MOR TO TELL AND DO DONT YOU THINK
| brenda.warren.1257 chapter 14 . 1/11/2015
WHYCANT THY JUST LEAVE THEM ALONE WHAT PURPOSE DO THEY JST TAKE PEOPE WHEN THEY WANT TO
| brenda.warren.1257 chapter 13 . 1/11/2015
OK WHAT IS HER ACE IN THE HOLE ANT WIT TO SEE THIS STORY MFFLES ME DONTQUIET UNDERSTAND IT.
| brenda.warren.1257 chapter 12 . 1/11/2015
SHE HGOT EDWARD OUT OF TERE DID SHE MANAGE TO GET EVERYBODY OUT WHAT HAPPENED TO ARO AND HIS BROHERS ARE THEY SAFE NOW
| brenda.warren.1257 chapter 11 . 1/11/2015
BUT WHAT IS GOING ON HOW DID GARE GET AWAY WHERE IS JASPER AND WHA IS KATE AND ALIC DOING THERE