Reviews for Undisclosed Desires
animedevilluvzyuri chapter 2 . 4/21/2017
So I'm guessing you didn't get over that writer's block and didn't know where to take the story.
mpowers045 chapter 2 . 8/11/2016
Don't stop! Please!
Sebastian revelo chapter 2 . 7/11/2016
Very hot
Sebastian revelo chapter 1 . 7/11/2016
It was very hot. I can't wait to read part 2
Pearl-Kisses chapter 2 . 6/13/2014
I really liked this story but I wish the sex-part was more detailed. You seem like an excellent writer, and I just want more!
Rain Everwood chapter 2 . 11/12/2013
I love this so much 3 i cant wait to hear more. Thow i wish the love seen was a a more full description. Still awsome.
Thanatos369 chapter 2 . 5/29/2013
great chapter and you can explain Hollie's absance by mafia or use the villain from the movie
Malestrom21 chapter 2 . 6/22/2012
loved the first and second chapter, cant wait till update
DragonMaster4872 chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
Great first chapter! I'm very curious to see how this goes. Please Update soon!