|Reviews for Ambitious Wings and the Dubious Ronin|
| FireEatsSKY chapter 20 . 10/6
I'm going to take a shot in the dark and say this story is deader than a doorknob.
| rahad chapter 6 . 11/20/2018
| L7DZv chapter 1 . 9/4/2018
| thejkshadow1 chapter 1 . 8/17/2018
did you really feel you needed to point out that your oc is black that much dark skinned man is used to much and this only the prologue you need some variety or just say they did this or that better than recycling the same phrase over. and over
| Dr. Frankenjones chapter 20 . 4/23/2018
Dude, I want the next chapter! :D
| korlinki chapter 2 . 12/31/2017
i was counting on some mature mc who when see boobs don't lose blood but i was wrong especially that he have girls before. But if you read below M most stories are trash for kids.
| Blake2020 chapter 1 . 10/17/2017
| diazr9999 chapter 3 . 6/11/2017
can you add number 22 kocho in kai's sekirei
| diazr9999 chapter 20 . 6/11/2017
make a challenge to get Taki back then let her be Kai's sekirei please
| diazr9999 chapter 19 . 5/18/2017
Could you put Taki as Kai's sekirei also please
| AnimeLoverQ8 chapter 3 . 4/24/2017
Is there really a marvel va shonen jump game or not
| Shogun lord poke burst chapter 3 . 4/21/2017
OMG YOU REFERENCED THE SUITE LIFE OF ZACK AND CODY, CAMEO
| bavalos chapter 7 . 1/20/2017
Great Story. Its really well done and the characterization is pretty well done.
| stevesgaming87 chapter 19 . 10/18/2016
You keep misspelling lose... Loose is when something isnt tight, lose is when you aren't the winner of an altercation.
| CaptainToast321 chapter 1 . 6/20/2016
First things first. 140 isn't genius. It's gifted. Even on the lowest definition of genius, it still doesn't make the cut.
Secondly, idk why, but the OC just really didn't work for me. Idk what in particular is wrong about him, but I just couldn't connect.