Reviews for Sue Hunt: Twilight Edition
ONNMT chapter 1 . 2/17/2014
Even better than the last :')
God, this was beautiful. I knew from the moment that I read that first paragraph: "Or not; like I care about the people who read Twilight fanfiction" (If it makes ya feel better, I came for the sequel; screw Twilight! XP) Kami, I love how your OCs just ripped off everyone, and the fight scene, brief as it was, was brilliant.
Thank you! XD
-ONNMT
Nolidoli chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
Well written, and I think the one negative review should be discredited for defending twilight and attacking Americans when Stephanie Meyer is an American (since being one maybe she's a typical american?) Besides the point I liked reading this especially the part when the tell Bella to put more emotion in her voice! Now I liked some of twilight as a young teen but then I grew up read other authors and now its like that awful stage I had to admit I went through in high school. At least I can be grateful I only read the books and never was a die hard fan of them or any characters (I liked Leah that was pretty much it) There are just so many better writers.
So thank you for being one of them!
PenGator3 chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
Quoting the immortal words of Red, "..."
ANonymous chapter 1 . 12/1/2011
You are a truly terrible writer.

I see on this forum you think you are great?

No.

This was sad.

Twilight isn't corrupting America, it's a new take on the monsters and bringing them into a new light. Btw: Twilight is all over the world, not just YOUR country you stupid, ignorant american.

You are a typical American too, thinking you are better then the rest of the world. Heck, better then the rest of the USA.

Start writing Fanfictions on something that people, ACTUALLY read, like Twilight. Not some stupid japanese porn anime shit.
The Faster Blade chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
I guess I can stop being such a hold out now. After about three years of having known your work, but too much of a lazy ass/insomniac/horny teenager-adult, I figure nows as good a time as any.

Although I do find it odd that I take my chance to praise your writing through a review for a fic written through the sheer unlimited amount of controlled hatred for what may be one the worst fandoms ever cultivated... BTW, those on sentences were a parody of how Stephanie Meyers interprets sentence structure.

I figure that as insignificant as we are, there's no reason to not be glad that she didn't continue to rape the good pastime of literature with more rewrites of her crap. I suggest that if you ever take another jab at this thing, make sure to salute the courageous young buck (or broad) that ruined it for the fans by posting early drafts of chapters online.

Well done on your roasting sir. And here a list of what I owe you reviews for:

"Comedie Noir"

"Trust"

"My Sick Little World" (a tie for my favorite of your works with the recently written...)

"Sokka Is A Sl" (attern)

"Humidity"

"Breaking"

"Hot Spring"

"Captivated"

I guess I should plug a request too since my headache is killing me to the point where touching another thing with a screen will kill me... There's a wonderful series known as "Scott Pilgrim", written by a guy who deserves the fans that Stephanie Meyers took from the grasp of common sense and enjoyable literature. I highly recommend it. And maybe another dive into the world of femdom regarding "Avatar: The Last Airbender". I loved your first.

Closing out my slightly fanboyish review, I consider your style very influential to me. And maybe, when I get past whatever insurmountable obstacle in my mind hat halts me from writing, I can show just how much you've influenced me. (for better or worse )

Best Regards,

DGC
iamnuff chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
i saw you wrote a twilight fanfic and i lost all respect for you, then i read the discription, and you got it back, then i read the fic and now i have brand shiny new respect for you.

SPARKLE FAIRIES!