Reviews for Ending Live on Christmas
victoriantealady chapter 6 . 8/29/2012
I just found this story on your profile page. Your English is really improving. I wish I could learn a second language and be able to read and write in it as well as you.

My sincere hope that whatever crisis you faced you were able to defeat. This story is very interesting and I hope you would consider taking it back up and finishing it.
ShortandSassy chapter 5 . 6/20/2011
Please do continue this story - I want to see what happens next!
GingerNinja1111 chapter 5 . 3/19/2011
This was a very good chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Lightningtrance256 chapter 5 . 3/19/2011
oh boy, gibbs being nice. that's a bad sign...
Lidil chapter 5 . 3/18/2011
I like the way this story is going.

It is good.

Your story. Your words.

Looking forward to more.
Lightningtrance256 chapter 4 . 3/16/2011
O my gosh, now I can't stop smiling
Lidil chapter 4 . 1/13/2011
I am sorry to hear that your writing is in crisis.

I like your work.

How may I help you?
GingerNinja1111 chapter 4 . 1/13/2011
Update soon! Please!
GingerNinja1111 chapter 3 . 1/3/2011
Update soon! I would not mind helping with the grammar in the next chapter! I love this story.
zats chapter 3 . 1/3/2011
Found your story and was reading it and liked that it was different from the usual stories I read. Hope you write more soon.
ban-chan100 chapter 2 . 1/2/2011
ohhh this story is soooo sad i hope it gets happyier please continue its great and i cant wait for the next part.
GingerNinja1111 chapter 2 . 12/30/2010
Tony! Update asap! I need to know what's going to happen to him.
GingerNinja1111 chapter 2 . 12/30/2010
Tony! Update asap! I need to know what's going to happen to him.
healingcat chapter 2 . 12/30/2010
I'm interested enough to want to see where you are going with this story. Doing good so far.
Lidil chapter 2 . 12/30/2010
Sigh!

If you're as great a fan of NCIS as you say you are, you'd know that Timothy McGee is a Junior Field Agent, second to the Senior Field Agent (Anthony 'Tony' DiNozzo), and is no longer a Probationary Agent.

Nor are your Beta Readers. They should have caught the error.
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