Reviews for Average Joe in Bullet Hell
anonymous chapter 29 . 4/25
Great story, characters, and 10/10 humor!
Kind of a shame that the author left this unfinished, though.
M. Fujiwara chapter 1 . 4/18
This chapter really hooks you into the rest of the story. Even though this is just the beginning, this is one of the better self-inserts out there. I especially like the narrative...language...thing that I don't know how to describe. There are some questions I have, though. What happened to all the other "gappies"? What are Yukari's motives? Was the "Christ on a motorbike" references intentional? Looks like we shall find out in the next chapter!
Kingtutgaming chapter 1 . 3/5
God this is so fucking cringe-worthy.
Creepy Quiet Kid chapter 13 . 2/4
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ArcherShirou chapter 2 . 10/26/2015
very good.
Legacy Of Misspent Youth chapter 18 . 9/17/2015
Loving this stories! Keep up the good work bro! I support this story through the end! :)
pltrgst chapter 3 . 4/29/2015
where will his ability will come from?
do you mean ebery human in gensokyo has a unique ability?
DanielLC chapter 27 . 4/28/2015
Aren't the residents of the Scarlet Devil Mansion outsiders?
DanielLC chapter 22 . 4/20/2015
I keep trying to read Ryan like it rhymes with nyan.
Guest chapter 9 . 9/4/2014
Cirno pretty much was always the strongest fairy. At least, I can't name any stronger.
Guest chapter 3 . 9/4/2014
Reimu telling you to work hard? hypocrite...
EX4LT3DSH4D0W5 chapter 29 . 8/4/2014
...Welp, it was good run. I'm pretty sure this is mostly dead, and for understandable reasons, but it does not quell the sadness and rage in my heart that such a great fic isn't completed. I love Ryan, Ira seems to have some secrets, and Chino is more than a punching bag, which surprised the hell outta me. That's not to say it's bad, it's great! Also, Ryan/Utsuho FTW! I love love love this 'fic, but it's been TWO YEARS. Also, I don't know if you know, but your 'fic has a TV Tropes page all to itself.
Goomba98 chapter 1 . 4/18/2014
I don't think the eyes in Yukari's gap blink, nor does Meiling have fangs.
pikpacker chapter 27 . 2/17/2014
Did this fic die? I really hope not because this is the best story I have ever read. Can't wait for the next chapter (30)
Spartan Yoshi 90 chapter 1 . 12/5/2013
"Slay Gravity"

finally! The foul beast hath been slain!
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