Reviews for Average Joe in Bullet Hell
Guest chapter 1 . 7/4
This fic is horrible. It's just a power fantasy of some hormonal teenager. Don't write anything again.
KvAT chapter 1 . 6/26
Well honestly, your name will sound weird even in the US. "Ryan Randa" is the kind of name I would expect from a fictional Indonesia-based country lmao
Spooke125 chapter 29 . 5/17
Are you ever planning on continuing this? i know its been 8 years but this story is still one of the best and I'd love to see it finished
SquareDork chapter 29 . 9/12/2020
godspeed, this is probably my absolute favorite touhou fanfic i've ever read, good job man.
eseer chapter 12 . 8/20/2020
ryan: maybe if i block out my thoughts-
satori: nope.
ryan: ... *inhale* it is time for the final option.
satori: it wont wo-
ryan: _*bombarding satori's third eye with the mental screech of a enraged banshee, a bored Revotrisity jevil, and a startled whismur.*_
ItsEizanAgain chapter 13 . 5/28/2019
that went from typical fanfic oc self insert to disney music miracle scene in a flash
Crainium9 chapter 8 . 2/11/2019
So nothing more than oh I actually stabbed you and that’s it no recompense or anything or even a sorry
Spooke125 chapter 29 . 6/7/2018
I doubt you even are even using this account anymore Sasquatch, but if you are do you ever plan on finishing this fic?
tiguidi123 chapter 29 . 9/15/2017
It's unfortunate this fic had to die out, it was really starting to shape up nicely... But oh well, it was a good run while it lasted!
Guest chapter 29 . 5/9/2017
The guy must've been hunted down for being too magnificent. Godspeed you Magnificent Sasquatch!
Kurzoviya chapter 17 . 3/14/2017
What is that chapter title even supposed to mean, by the way?
ItzABlueWulf chapter 29 . 12/1/2016
Too bad this fic is dead it was shaping up nicely.
mograinya chapter 29 . 10/19/2016
Fantastic story! I love it!
anonymous chapter 29 . 4/25/2016
Great story, characters, and 10/10 humor!
Kind of a shame that the author left this unfinished, though.
M. Fujiwara chapter 1 . 4/18/2016
This chapter really hooks you into the rest of the story. Even though this is just the beginning, this is one of the better self-inserts out there. I especially like the narrative...language...thing that I don't know how to describe. There are some questions I have, though. What happened to all the other "gappies"? What are Yukari's motives? Was the "Christ on a motorbike" references intentional? Looks like we shall find out in the next chapter!
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