|Reviews for Taken|
| Myvampirepuppy chapter 4 . 1/5/2011
Yeah, this chapter length is pretty good. Please don't stop with this!
| Mel72000 chapter 4 . 1/5/2011
I like the chapters enough long as that.
I would have thought that Conan would have keep calm himself...
I love your chapter, i wait impatiently to read the fellow chapter.
| Miruial chapter 3 . 1/4/2011
Yep, I'm pretty sure it's bocchama that Jii calls Kaito... This story has a lot of potential to be good; keep writing!
| Kittychan H chapter 3 . 1/3/2011
Must say, I'm enjoying your little ficcy. Well written and thought out. Please allow me to publicly speculate...
I think you could even get Conan out of this mess.
Irish seems to be saving the 'Big Surprise' of who Conan is for when he's ready. And even though Gin has now seen his face, he may not recognize him again later, because he is without his glasses and has been pretty throughly beaten up. (messed hair, swollen eye, bruises, maybe some blood too.) The other BO members will underestimate him because they still think he's a kid and he does still have his nifty suspenders left to work with (maybe a detective badge too, it never came up in the movie).
Also, Kid is curious... that's a definite advantage, even though Conan may not think so.
In reading your other comments...
Heiji seems to talk with Kudo quite a bit on the phone. Even though that restaurant promise is made in the movie 14 after-story, Heiji could be refering to another conversation we didn't see.
I also believe that Okiya may be Akai, and perhaps he is also Burbon or maybe both at the same time. (Who better to infiltrate the BO than someone who has already done it?) I don't know about the Akai look alike from that snowy mountain episode... he's just there to confuse everyone... or maybe he's Burbon...
Looking forward to your update...
| Eternal She-Wolf chapter 3 . 1/3/2011
Now that looks like a nice plot... based off one of my favorite movies in the DC universe! Please don't delete it! And make Hattori and Kaito work together... Plase? I love when this happens, they so baffle the police.
| Aeyra chapter 3 . 1/2/2011
I'm pretty sure it's Kaito-bochama too. Poor Conan-kun, he's strapped to a stinking table. I can't wait to see the boss! Keep on writing!
| 1412 karasu chapter 3 . 1/2/2011
Cool~ Though i wonder what Irish will do... Thanks for updating!
| Akakata7 chapter 3 . 1/2/2011
YES! AWESOME chapter! I LOVE IT! Poor Conan! Strapped to a table! Wah! What will the Boss do when he founds out? Will all the characters come together or work seprately? CAN'T WAIT! UPDATE! I'M BEGGING YOU! ARIGATO~
| Mel72000 chapter 3 . 1/2/2011
Thank you very much for this great chapter, I love whe you are discribing the feelings of the other characters !
Thank you very much for this fic !
| 13animenurd13 chapter 2 . 1/1/2011
awwww Kid said His detective! lol XDD Heiji yelled at the screen cause of a broken promise? lol
| Eyeinthesky chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Great idea! Let's see where it flows!
| tsuanyue chapter 2 . 12/30/2010
Looks really interesting so far. Though Jii always calls Kaito bouchama/young master. Keep up the great work. :D
| Akakata7 chapter 2 . 12/30/2010
I love the rewrite! It was great! This is an awesome chapter too! Everyone finds out! Oh, but there are some mistakes. Gents's mom would just call him Genta. Agasa calls Ai Ai-kun because he's older and uses kun as a suffix. Kaito calls Jii Jii-chan. Jii calls Kaito Kaito-bocchama cause it means young master. LOVE IT! Can't wait for next chapter! UPDATE! Arigato~
| Mel72000 chapter 2 . 12/30/2010
I am not agree withe the hypothese "Okiya is Bourbon or another member of Black Organisation" I think that Okiya is Akai because we have many clues wich indicate that.
Look on the forum of DCTP, you have a list of theses clues, it's very great !
I love this chapter and I can't wait the next !
Thank you !
| Crystal Nephesia Hawklaw chapter 2 . 12/30/2010
Cool ! I love What-ifs too !
Please update soon !
(And the reason Agasa calls Haibara Ai-kun is just because he's an elder, and that's an old expression that is only used by those n.n)