Reviews for Taken
Ally Marton chapter 4 . 1/6/2011
As for Vermouth, I'm thinking a hair pin, but I don't quite know how that would keep one's hair tidy (perhaps supressed from appearing untidy, but...) anyway! :D This chapter was in no way TOO LONG, in face, I fell it was TOO SHORT! XD No no, it was just the right length, I only wish I could read more! I hope your able to add more to it soon, I am totally in love with this plot!

~Ally
Ally Marton chapter 3 . 1/5/2011
Oh sure, like you REALLY need to ask politely for reviews, as if people aren't naturally COMPELLED by your writing to review. :) Really, I love this story so far, I want more, like, I really want more and I want to know what they heck is going to happen to Conan and how the heck everyone can save him! :"D Also, when the Detective Boys decided it was time to save their friend, I had a total, 'AWWWWW!' moment. That's the thing about how you write, most writings still hold the same general emotions even after you laspe to a different part of the story, but yours changed all around! The kiddos I felt the 'AW!', Ai I felt fear for, Heji nervous compassion (since he wants to save his friend), charmed wit with Kaito's discovery, and just a sadness for Ran. Oh, not to mention total suspense holding-me-by-the-throat intensity on Conan-ah, Kudo's part. :D Please write more soon, I'm so excited for this story!

~Ally
Ally Marton chapter 2 . 1/5/2011
This story is so stink'in good so far, AHHHH! This is personal preference and slight fantasy wishing here, but I TOTALLY want to see Heji and Kaito team up to rescue everyone's favorite and totally awesome detective, SAVE SHINICHI FROM THEM AND HURRY!
Ally Marton chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
Continue, oh please continue. Oh, you did! Yay! :hurries to next chapter: :D I got an adrenaline rush reading this, not only from the memory of the movie, but the add-ins you put, it's brilliant! Can't wait to see it's outcome!
nobody10901 chapter 4 . 1/5/2011
I really like long chapters! If only you could update them fast too... -3- AWESOME CHAPTER! I liked how we switched from different points! I have no idea what Vemouth did. 3 Ooh! Is Ran figuring it out? I CANT WAIT! UPDATE PLEASE! Arigato~
Pu7o chapter 4 . 1/5/2011
Hm. The hair thing... I'm thinking it might have something to do with Kaitô Kid, since Kaito and Shin'ichi only differ by their hair, but I don't see how that'd help Conan in any way, so I dunno...
Myvampirepuppy chapter 4 . 1/5/2011
Yeah, this chapter length is pretty good. Please don't stop with this!
Mel72000 chapter 4 . 1/5/2011
I like the chapters enough long as that.

I would have thought that Conan would have keep calm himself...

I love your chapter, i wait impatiently to read the fellow chapter.
Miruial chapter 3 . 1/4/2011
Yep, I'm pretty sure it's bocchama that Jii calls Kaito... This story has a lot of potential to be good; keep writing!
Kittychan H chapter 3 . 1/3/2011
Must say, I'm enjoying your little ficcy. Well written and thought out. Please allow me to publicly speculate...

I think you could even get Conan out of this mess.

Irish seems to be saving the 'Big Surprise' of who Conan is for when he's ready. And even though Gin has now seen his face, he may not recognize him again later, because he is without his glasses and has been pretty throughly beaten up. (messed hair, swollen eye, bruises, maybe some blood too.) The other BO members will underestimate him because they still think he's a kid and he does still have his nifty suspenders left to work with (maybe a detective badge too, it never came up in the movie).

Also, Kid is curious... that's a definite advantage, even though Conan may not think so.

In reading your other comments...

Heiji seems to talk with Kudo quite a bit on the phone. Even though that restaurant promise is made in the movie 14 after-story, Heiji could be refering to another conversation we didn't see.

I also believe that Okiya may be Akai, and perhaps he is also Burbon or maybe both at the same time. (Who better to infiltrate the BO than someone who has already done it?) I don't know about the Akai look alike from that snowy mountain episode... he's just there to confuse everyone... or maybe he's Burbon...

Looking forward to your update...
Eternal She-Wolf chapter 3 . 1/3/2011
Now that looks like a nice plot... based off one of my favorite movies in the DC universe! Please don't delete it! And make Hattori and Kaito work together... Plase? I love when this happens, they so baffle the police.
Aeyra chapter 3 . 1/2/2011
I'm pretty sure it's Kaito-bochama too. Poor Conan-kun, he's strapped to a stinking table. I can't wait to see the boss! Keep on writing!
1412 karasu chapter 3 . 1/2/2011
Cool~ Though i wonder what Irish will do... Thanks for updating!
nobody10901 chapter 3 . 1/2/2011
YES! AWESOME chapter! I LOVE IT! Poor Conan! Strapped to a table! Wah! What will the Boss do when he founds out? Will all the characters come together or work seprately? CAN'T WAIT! UPDATE! I'M BEGGING YOU! ARIGATO~
Mel72000 chapter 3 . 1/2/2011
Thank you very much for this great chapter, I love whe you are discribing the feelings of the other characters !

Thank you very much for this fic !
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