|Reviews for Something Nice|
| The Exile chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
I like the way you write their interaction and its sweet that Makalov is at least trying his best to do something to redeem himself in the eyes of his sister.
| FireEdge chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
Nice! One thing that I love about the FE series are their sibling relationships. Makalov and Marcia are a great pair, and you definitely did them justice. I like how you didn't give Makalov a REASON to get Marcia the necklace other than "just because". I think it suits his character well. And you definitely captured Marcia's character nicely, also.
By the way, I loved this line: "She's schooled herself to distrust him, and it hurts."
Oh, and a typo in: "that's he's crossed a thousand times." [don't need that apostrophe 's']
And yeah, you really should get on that HaarJill! :P
| kittykatloren chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
Adorable, despite the fact that Marcia and Makalov are not Haar and Jill. x3 Ehehe, I really liked this, though!
| Tocabella chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
Yes! As soon as I saw this I knew I had to read it. You did a great job writing both Makalov and Marcia. Sweet sibling interaction between one of my favorite pair of FE siblings makes me happy. :) Great job!
| YourConscienceOnMute chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
This is adorable, fullstop. I've always kinda wanted to see Makalov getting off his butt and doing something productive, if only because I can't stand someone with such a complete lack of sympathetic traits. But this. Makalov and Marcia - such unexpected sibling fluff, and it works so well!
I really like your way of writing Makalov, even if I don't like him as a character much at all. Props for this.
Also, bookmarking. Thank you so much for posting this~