I am so in love with this story. I mean it; it's just too awesome. I wanted to leave a review with a little more depth than just this... but I guess I'm just strung along for the ride right now, I just can't seem to be able to come up with anything worthwhile to say other than this story has been amazing up to now and I'm eagerly anticipating the next chapter!

Amazing story. Truly in love with this.

I love this story so much. This chapter has to be the best so far! Patiently awaiting the next one!

Ummm, this is freaking amazing. Truly one of the best stories I've seen. Please, please update more! Especially because of the cliffhanger. I'm actually not sure what's going to happen, because you've made it sound like Aang is watching from afar, and in about two seconds, Toph's going to learn how to write lefty. I actually hope someone besides Aang saves the day, not sure why. I think it'd be interesting if it were Jet, or hell, why not re-introduce that crazy girl by causing some distraction? Because then Aang would be grateful for that crazy chick while Jet's still terrified, haha.

Oh, and I'd rather not have Toph get out of her situation on her own, because she needs to be humbled soon, since she's far too proud. That's what got her into trouble in the first place.

Just my input on what should happen, but I'm sure you've got something interesting in store for the next chapter.

UPDATE! Please! I'm not alone when I say I want to read the next chapter!

Hey! Sorry for not reviewing sooner! X(

OH NO! TOPH'S IN TROUBLE! AANG, DON'T STAND THERE LIKE AN IMBECILE, DO SOMETHING! D8

Oh man, you just HAD to stop there, did ya? XP Well, all I can do now is just hope that Toph will get out of that dangerous predicament!

Got nothing else to say, except this was a cool chapter! I can't wait to read more! :D

AHHHHHHHHHHH! I hate when Toph's size gets in the way! And I can't believe how mean merchants are.:( They're all a bunch of snobbish rip off artists! A Con man a in freakin disgusie here people!

I'm hopeing that your going somewhere awesome with this and don't secretly hate Toph.(LOL)

~Please update soon!

Damn, I hate these kind of cliffhangers, yet they do what they're intended to do. This chapter was more than well worth the wait. I'll be looking forward to see if Toph gets to keep both of her pretty little hands.

Love it :) very nicely done as always

NOOOOOOOO! You cannot stop there! this story is to awesome for words! please update soon!

Oh my Godness...

Your story is a piece of art. I couldn't help but read all the chapters in a row. My coffee is cold by now

No, really. It's an amazing story. One could really follow the story as if you were a part of it. Especially the feelings of Aang! You described them so well, my heart was aching everytime you mentioned his scar. I was simply stunned. The scene with the crazy girl, was hilarious, even though I felt bad for Aang for getting hit instead of Jet.

I like Tophs character, altough she's a "bit" rude, but that's Toph. She would be out of character if she didn't act like that. :) I wonder who will stop the merchant to hurt Toph. I hope Aang helps her, but somehow I have the feeling that you have something bigger in hand.

How did you manage to describe the lifes of those who have barely nothing? I was caught in awe while reading your story. I felt pity for those who are poor and somehow I think your story had an influence on me. I might think differently when I come across a poor person again. Thanks for your story!

Continue your good work. :)

Your FMC

Wow an intense ending. i like how you left the chapter on a cliffhanger! Awesome chapter.

This is an absolutely wonderful story! I hope you continue this, and update soon! You managed to get a really good idea of Aang and Toph's side of the story, and they're both really in character. Great job.

love it! Update soon!

Great chapter! I love the mention of the books that Aang was talking about, The Blind Bandit and The Runaway. The atmosphere around those two is pretty tense. I can't wait to read the next chapter. I'm also interested in what the plot of your one shot is. Maybe you can tell me what the plot is and I'll give my opinion on it.

YOUR ALIVE :D Anyway, that was really good, i especially like the little allusion you made to the real show, with the whole "what's your problem" bit. This was generally a strong chapter as a whole and leaves the reader (myself and others) wondering exactly what will happen in the future as well as how on Earth could these two ever get along? Anyway, amazing job for a funny chapter

as for a one-shot, I believe that even if its "out-there", you should go for it. Nothing ventured, nothing gained after all.