Reviews for Entranced |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I have to admit, this story has become one of my favorites already. No complaints on my half also, bring Jet into the story was a great idea. Im glad you kept his ideals close to the real thing, it made the chapter all the more enjoyable. I hope you update soon again. |
![]() ![]() hi there! great chapter and i hope you update soon :D also like the part where "the bei fong girl" aka toph said "who ever you are, leave me alone" just like in the actual show. idk it just made me happy. |
![]() ![]() I have to say, that was totally awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't offer too much for a review other than the fact that I like it (other than the fact it feels vaguely familiar) and that I want to see how this story turns out. Please update soon and update often. |
![]() ![]() A very entertaining beginning; i hope you continue and finish this piece because it has the potential to be amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how this story is going! Great choices of words also. Can't wait for your update :] |
![]() ![]() I LOVE IT! :) your writing is very descriptive. i was hooked from the moment i read the first sentence. I can not wait for the next chapter and the imminent meeting between Toph and Aang, looking forward to that Keep up the excellent work and update soon please :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is looks like the process of an awesome Taang fic. :) You know, this sorta feels like Aladdin almost. XD Anywho, awesome writing you have for your first fanfic! And nice AU plot too! I also like how you describe the surrondings and the situations(if only I was that good at descriptions XP ). Good work on this chapter! I'll happily wait for the next one! :D P.S. How old is Aang and Toph in this? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woah. Best Taang fic I've ever read. Nice story so far. :] |
![]() ![]() ![]() This one is very good! It's beautifully written and I, honestly, was getting terribly tired of High School AUs, so this one is a breath of fresh air. Keep up the good work, I'll be waiting for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() HOLY CRAP! what i have just read was probably the best thing in the whole wide world!1 OMG! i am speachless! WOW! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to say I love the story so far. Keep up the good work. Hoping to see the next chapter soon. |