YEAH!

Awesome! Some backstory will be revealed I hope.

Its rather tragic to realize that in this alternate universe Aang never met Appa and didn't live the idyllic peaceful lifestyle of the monks and never even saw the mountaintop temples.

He never played air ball or bison polo and never tasted fruit pie or flew on a hang has never seen a flying lemur bat or ridden an air scooter.

What's with the scar in Aang's arm? What happened to him?
Arrrrggghhh! that old bastard is going to hurt Toph. But I don't think Aang is going to stay quiet about that.
Good cliffhanger.
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Wow! what a short temper has Toph... and how rude she is with Aang... then it's true that from love to hatred theres only one step hehehehehe
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jajaja..."famous last words", I'm still laughing, and gosh almost were what a big slapt Aang got because of Jet and his big mouth... I live for these wonderful hilarious moments.
Katara is a healer here in your AU... wonderful character and, another cliffhanger.
I'm really hooked on this story and I'll be reading and reviewing in the future.
Thanks for write and share this awesome fanfic.
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Ahhhh... Jet, Iroh, Zuko... all secundary but awesome characters in your fic. And the scene in the tea shop... wonderful! Love at first sigh and love is in the air, also I like the cliffhanger at the end.
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Nice start. I really love the way you describe the characters and their surroundings as well as their emotions.
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yay another chapter hope your not working too hard

Wow, this is a GREAT piece of work. I know, academics is annoying. And the apologies in the past chapters are starting to get me worried. Is this story still worked on and how long were these past hiatuses

Is this story still in circulation? It's really good and I had read too many good stories that would build up to nothing.

Really great story, hopefully you'll update soon.
You've done quite a good job conveying the world and the life for the different folks of the city, all from the rich folks to the homeless. All of Aang and Toph's interactions are great my favorite being when they simply hang out at Aang's place with leads to another favorite moment, Toph's reality check wich was handeled very well. The buildup of their feelings and respecrive chrushes was very nicely done.

Hopefully you'll delve deeper into Aang's past specificly what happened when he got his scar(I'm guessing that it involved his fathers death) or deeper into Toph's romantic past. I'd rater lärarn more about Aang's scar because it's something that has had a bigger precense in the story but then again, it's your story so you can chose not to tell what happened if you so choose and there's nothing I can do about it.

Well anyway, this is long enough so I'll just say goodbye and se you soon (hopefully very soon). Intill next time!

I really like the way this story is going. The characters are very well done. If I had to look for something to complain about it would be that Aang says that he doesn't like to steal and doing immoral yet he isn't actively looking for a job or a way out as Sokka did. It's totally Aang because he doesn't like to affront his problems, unlike Toph, but I don't like people that mops and moans without seeking a solution.

I can't way to see how you'll handle the situation. :)

Best wishes,
-Alice

Well... I just wasted twenty minutes of my life. DAMN IT! Why didn't you finish this!? Now i'll never know!

ooooooo it's gonna get good...I think. Hell, you ain't even reading this are you?