|Reviews for City of Angels|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/28
Potato potato potato
| ILoveSebastionAndClaceForever chapter 1 . 6/17/2014
i liked it!
| ClaceHerondale chapter 1 . 7/7/2013
| dewikaka chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
wow so hot in here
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
That's the best I have ever read you aren't like "fucked" ever two words
| Raogrhys chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
| vampchick09 chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
That was a great One-shot! the song definitely set the mood! It made it more Romantic! xD
| readingmama chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
Finally my MI fic diving paid off. This was very well written and I thought you did a great job at keeping everyone in character.
| Indybleu chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
Wow super cute, I haven't read the books in a while but the actions seem to fit as I remember them. The only thing I would watch is switching pov, sometimes it's in first person (I ) and sometimes in third ( Clary/ she) but good :)
| diggthaat chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
this is the first one he actually put a condom on lol.
people be forgetting about protection haha.
it was written really good, and this stayed to the truth.
with how she would feel losing it for the first time :) a lot of people make her out to have more experience but this is how it should be. good job
| patlynne chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
| hoppy9000 chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
i really really liked it it was really sweet and i like the music you set to it it was really good just one thing if jace came it would be over guys can come multiple times once they come its over but i just ingored that part so its all good and i reallly liked it the whole thing from begining to end
| Couldn't-think-of-a-pen-name chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
I don't think I could have written their first time better! :)
| Jane Catt chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
Very nice story! Jace is awesome!
| TaylorJade chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
I thought it was very sweet. (: The characters were perfect. (:
Greeeeaaaaaattttttt jobbb! (: