Reviews for Better Than Tonight
quietshadowwolf chapter 15 . 7/15/2012
awww im glad you didnt have her lose her first child. she is too cute lol. great story. normally dont read Quil stories but this one i was more then happy to read lol
LuvinTwilight143 chapter 15 . 11/8/2011
loved it
LuvinTwilight143 chapter 15 . 11/8/2011
loved it
air29 chapter 15 . 1/17/2011
aw it ended -sniff sniff- great story :)
LoriDuchess chapter 15 . 1/17/2011
great story, glad to see focus of off Paul. :)
Hapsgurl80 chapter 15 . 1/17/2011
Awesome story thank god they didnt loose mindy cant wait for what you got coming next
gabycaldemeraz chapter 15 . 1/17/2011
ohhhh last one already ? :(

She has her mommy's eyes!

haha I was hoping you named his baby Claire hahahah SO IRONIC! hahahah

awww in in overalls and sneakers :)

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHh they're expecting another? ! SO happy

AWWWW of course! Sethy :)

oh LORD, bedtime stories in Quileute? YES PLEASE; actually Paul? baby? Puppy? Im kinda sleepy, I want "green eggs, and ham" in Quileute :)...

hahaha she's so cute :)

haha he was her "item" awwwwwwwwww the irony :P

AH! she wants to look pretty for Seth! OH BOY she will give Quil a heart attack when she finally falls inlove with him hahahaha

aaahahahaha I love her! poor Seth! hahahha

"sures" Max, you write SUCH ADORABLE babies!

ohh Seth, :) i love you!

TEARS! i want that! HAHAHAHA :)
Angel N Darkness chapter 15 . 1/17/2011
you did a great job on this and the whole story... love it... post your next one soon...
gabycaldemeraz chapter 14 . 1/17/2011
WHAT! 2 whole months! OMG! Poor Quil, and Ash and Baby!

:( he mised graduation :(

I hate MAtthew :(

no quil, come on! dnt give up the fight! what are you doing? That's your love and your baby!

Emily crying, hahaha I identify.. :(

Emily si the REAL Alpha! haha GOTTA LOVE HER

awww "always" Sam, so sweet!

What a prick! he used to be so sweet to his "baby girl" and now he talks to her like she was trash! :(

NO!.. please PLEASE let the baby be ok.. PLEASE

OMG! Ash is killing me :*(

My prince!, He's ever so soft and loving to her, trying not to panic .. i love him

At least, Im hoping that the fact that she is feeling some pain, means the baby is still alive :).. right?

Angel N Darkness chapter 14 . 1/17/2011
you did a great job on this chapter... love it... update soon...
Hapsgurl80 chapter 14 . 1/17/2011
Please let the baby be ok god u made me cry! Please update soon
air29 chapter 13 . 1/16/2011
Damn her dad's mean...and i thought my parents were bad
Hapsgurl80 chapter 13 . 1/16/2011
Poor ash and quil i hope her dad comes to his senses please update soon
gabycaldemeraz chapter 13 . 1/15/2011
Hey now! haha WHY on earth are they assuming Gaby and Paul would be the first to have children? it better be because they LOVE EACH OTHER SO MUCH! haha.. oH WELL.. is it bad that I actually LIKE the real reason why? LOL, I mean JEEZ can you blame GABY for not being able to take her hands off Paul?.. I didnt think so..

oh Gosh, the name Gaby looks so perfect next to the name Paul.. :P

he's been planning it for a while!


O.M.G.. Paul went to the bathroom so I can say this without fear that he'll kill someone.. I ABSOLUTELY ADORE Quil, he is the sweetest wolf EVER!

I think its such a sweet gesture when the girls run their fingers through the guys hair, randomly or absentmindedly, the same goes for when the guys kiss the girls hair or forehead..

AAWWW! he asked!


awwww, Quil Sr. is so great!

what do you mean MUTT! YOU HIPOCRITE!


what do you mean YOU'LL BE SORRY? not a good idea to threaten a pregnant, already scared girl, ESPECIALLY when her wolf is right next to her!

wtffffffffffffffffffff! I HATE HIM!

that ass whole better not hurt her or cause her to loose the baby!
Angel N Darkness chapter 13 . 1/15/2011
you did a great job on this chapter... love it... update soon...
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