|Reviews for Undead War|
| Maniacbiscuit chapter 1 . 7/2/2011
It's pretty good so far(even if this chapter was kinda an epilogue)
| KeTai chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
this is really weird...but I actually really like it :-)
I would proof read a bit more and picky stuff but it doesn't need to be picky really.
| Lucifer Mortalis chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
This is pretty good. I would like to see more done with it in the future.
| HeatBlastMan chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
| youthboy14 chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
Pretty good first chapter. Two things I'd like to say:
more. Some errors are still present ("I don't have many times" instead of "I don't have much time", missing punctuation marks).
in the future expand a bit on the backstory behind the U.W.R. and the Fiery Team. I'd like to know more about Jeff and Marcus and their relationship in particular.
But what you have so far is nice.