|Reviews for Edward Masen: Property of the Texan Prince|
| ElijahJessGodric chapter 5 . 6h ago
I really enjoyed reading this and I can't wait for an update! You are updating right? Many thanks - Jess
| Debbie White chapter 5 . 3/29/2014
Great story so far please keep going can't wait for the next chapter! :)
| Team Peeta Mellark chapter 5 . 12/13/2013
this story is really awesome! please update soon, you have not even writin anything about Edward and Jasper yet :( I look forward to reading more!
| HiDiNgFrOmYoU chapter 5 . 4/2/2013
Thanks for reminding me why I had such a creepy vibe in that city, lol. :)
I love love love this story. It's amazing. I'll definitely check out that story you recommended and others of yours.
The emotions in this story are very apt. I enjoy it so much.
There's only one thing that bugs me, I get confused with the timeline of some parts like the Italy part now at the end and Edward's flashbacks. I eventually figure them out, or think I do. But anyways. Great story.
Question. When you wrote "reticent" with Laurent. What word did you mean? Bag? Sac is French for bag...confused...sorry. Partial French speaker/reader as I am it bugged me. Sorry :(
Thanks for the story!
| TheHiddenAngel chapter 5 . 2/10/2013
i dont know if his thirst for knowledge and uncanny observant ability is going to lead to his gift if and when you change him but other then that you give no idea to the other possiblity of the gifts around him(minus alice) and the pins that arent mentioned again what happened to them, and it seems a bit jumpy like i dont know where they are or when they got there and cant really picture their room very well,
just watch detail and stuff other then that it was great i hope it keeps going for i would be sad if it doesnt update and ends up being forgetten any who good luck and a speedy update
(no harm meant)
| Ennah1887 chapter 5 . 1/23/2013
Finish. I wouldn't have read because I need to see a completed cause of just this, but this is awesome. I was drawn in and not disapointed.
| CentauRita chapter 5 . 1/19/2013
I'm blue...where is Jasper!
| CentauRita chapter 2 . 1/19/2013
It certainly wasn't one of...Peace!
| BrittanyChayanne chapter 5 . 10/21/2012
Please tell me this fantastic story hasn't been abandoned!
| dazzlingrockstar chapter 5 . 5/10/2012
I like Carlisle. At least he has some compassion and doesn't think that his kind should see themselves as superiors. At least he cares for the human race - he obviously remembers what it's like to be human. James/ Victoria going at it like jackrabbits? UGH! God please don't ever do that again! It's nasty! I see it's been a while since you've updated. I hope the next chapter will come about soon! Good luck - loving this story like a crazy old women loves her cats.
| dazzlingrockstar chapter 4 . 5/10/2012
Well now... I certainly don't think anything bad happens to them, or anything that can harm them badly or kill them. After all, James did say that they would NOT be learning how to kill a vamp. Eager to read Jays character and the way you'll be developing him but not pissed... Not yet. Lauren is a tree-hugging, can't do anything wrong bitch. She could not even stand up for herself, come on!
| dazzlingrockstar chapter 3 . 5/10/2012
I hate-love Victoria. She's very cruel and sadistic but, I love how she doesn't give a f*ck about etiquette and all that surface shit. She may not have too much style and finesse but, she's a wild child which makes her fun! I hate Gianna and Heidi - royalty cock hoors, lol
| dazzlingrockstar chapter 2 . 5/10/2012
This sounds like its mixed with a few odds and ends from true blood. Really good chapter!
| dazzlingrockstar chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
This is pretty cool. Should have joined the movie world of twilight on fanfiction ages ago! Love it so far. Can't wait to catch up!
| simba5waldo5 chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
I notice u only have 5 chapters written, and u havent updared since june of last yr. But I am going to read and hope maybe u will write again. Maybe it is over. But really enjoying. Melissa