Reviews for Mai's The One
dark shadow400 chapter 20 . 12/15/2014
Awesome story I loved it
AmericaTheHetalian chapter 19 . 12/7/2014
Lol naru's initials are OCD XD
Guest chapter 19 . 7/14/2014
That was very good! It had the perfect amount of KAWAII XD and a perfect storyline too! I'm gonna bookmark it and go read the sequel! :3
Guest chapter 7 . 5/28/2014
he wouldn't be so immature. naru I mean
Guest chapter 1 . 4/27/2014
just a comment, no offence but I realised that you've made a mistake in naru's personality seeing as naru was never known to say sorry. (the part where he apologised for the invasion of privacy
JackFrostforever chapter 1 . 3/20/2014
I just pictured naru w/ glasses and mai is right he is cuter w/ glasses
kaoru12211991 chapter 11 . 12/3/2013
Wow, Bou-san and Ayako are really taking on the parent role now im just waiting for adoption papers to be whipped seriously even I felt bad for Mai and I consider myself lucky that in 17yrs I haven't had the talk, the nly thing I got told by my step dad was not to bring a boy home unless I was gonna marry him, wouldn't it be hilarious if Bou-san and Ayako taled to Naru and Mai about that? things could get reall good *evil smirk*
kaoru12211991 chapter 10 . 12/3/2013
THAT'S SO FREAKING CUTE XDXDXDXDDXDXDD
kaoru12211991 chapter 5 . 12/3/2013
Okay so im in love with this chapter, so glad I decided to stay up late and continue reading, I was almost at the end when my eyes wandered down the the bottom of the page seeing I was almost done the chapter and all I see is " He's gay." I swear I burst out laughing and trying to tell myself to shut up before wake up the whole damn house XD I can't wait to get some more of this XD
kaoru12211991 chapter 4 . 12/3/2013
What kind of conversation was that?! That's something you would talk about with another girl not your crush much less boss, I swear my heart can only take so much I was trying to muffle my squeals of delight XD, and then you go and leave me on a cliffhanger?! how could you its like 11:30pm and I have to wake up at 5:45 tomorrow but now I have to read the next chapter its killing me t know, im putting my love of this before my health and school im seriously addicted XD
fennikenfan chapter 11 . 11/8/2013
ha poor poor mai
AnimaMea chapter 19 . 11/7/2013
Awww...so sweeeetttt
this's the sweetest and cutest ghost hunt story I've ever read !
I really love it, especially the case...
*squealingofjoy*
NaginiFay chapter 19 . 9/12/2013
YAY! This was cute, but what war was Naru avoiding?
Iname Kohaki chapter 17 . 6/30/2013
I WANT A SEQUEL!
RosetheWolfgirl chapter 1 . 5/22/2013
lol i want to draw naru with glasses now...i shall :D
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