|Reviews for Mai's The One|
| kaoru12211991 chapter 11 . 12/3/2013
Wow, Bou-san and Ayako are really taking on the parent role now im just waiting for adoption papers to be whipped seriously even I felt bad for Mai and I consider myself lucky that in 17yrs I haven't had the talk, the nly thing I got told by my step dad was not to bring a boy home unless I was gonna marry him, wouldn't it be hilarious if Bou-san and Ayako taled to Naru and Mai about that? things could get reall good *evil smirk*
| kaoru12211991 chapter 10 . 12/3/2013
THAT'S SO FREAKING CUTE XDXDXDXDDXDXDD
| kaoru12211991 chapter 5 . 12/3/2013
Okay so im in love with this chapter, so glad I decided to stay up late and continue reading, I was almost at the end when my eyes wandered down the the bottom of the page seeing I was almost done the chapter and all I see is " He's gay." I swear I burst out laughing and trying to tell myself to shut up before wake up the whole damn house XD I can't wait to get some more of this XD
| kaoru12211991 chapter 4 . 12/3/2013
What kind of conversation was that?! That's something you would talk about with another girl not your crush much less boss, I swear my heart can only take so much I was trying to muffle my squeals of delight XD, and then you go and leave me on a cliffhanger?! how could you its like 11:30pm and I have to wake up at 5:45 tomorrow but now I have to read the next chapter its killing me t know, im putting my love of this before my health and school im seriously addicted XD
| fennikenfan chapter 11 . 11/8/2013
ha poor poor mai
| Litt'lVampx chapter 19 . 11/7/2013
this's the sweetest and cutest ghost hunt story I've ever read !
I really love it, especially the case...
| NaginiFay chapter 19 . 9/12/2013
YAY! This was cute, but what war was Naru avoiding?
| Iname Kohaki chapter 17 . 6/30/2013
I WANT A SEQUEL!
| RosetheWolfgirl chapter 1 . 5/22/2013
lol i want to draw naru with glasses now...i shall :D
| feamlenaruto chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
| Luna Moon chapter 18 . 9/21/2012
Loved this story. I haven't found a Ghost Hunt Story this good! Great job!
Just 1 thing though: When you say "escential" in the last sentence of the last chapter, the spelling is: 'essential'
| WitchWarren chapter 6 . 8/15/2012
Oh and LOL the gay thing last chapter! Died. Just dead. This is my ghost typing.
And don't worry about it - I'm a fast typer too, I tend to read and reread and then send it to two beta people because I'm majorly OCD when it comes to my fics.
So in the spirit of helping;
First line - "akward silence"
Koi - as in the carp. Coy - as in the emotion/attitude.
"You're shirt..." Your
I'm pretty sure cologne is spelt with an 'e'
Also - liar with an 'a'
If you find me offensive feel free to go "That Witch!" It's why I got this username after all! XD
...No...? ...Crickets...? Ok then.
| WitchWarren chapter 5 . 8/15/2012
Hi sorry - it's actually jealous, not jellous - you do that a couple of time at the start of the chapter. And liar not lier. "If you havn't noticed, I like you." was a really sweet line(I loved it, I fangirled) but it's haven't.
Sorry - spelling Nazi.
| Conejo-sama chapter 10 . 8/1/2012
Okay, Naru's been really OOC and it's freaking me out
| Conejo-sama chapter 8 . 8/1/2012
Okay, that was a twist. Naru is actually nineteen? And what war? It's only 2007. What war are you talking about?