Reviews for Evening Star
MsLiss chapter 34 . 9/23/2016
I hope this us a turning point for Edward if she recovers
If she doesn't I hope he changes her
Thank you
MsLiss chapter 30 . 9/23/2016
It's hard to read Edwards endless monologue of negative and berating thoughts .
But it's hard to turn away too.
I want to know where this goes.

They have all this live and devotion but it's tainted.
They are not honest with each other, or more accurately Edward is not honest.
It bothers me and is a bit sad.
Wordsintothevoid chapter 56 . 5/3/2016
This was absolutely incredible. This could be a legitimate novel in the Twilight series. Even though we've never met, I want you to know that I'm incredibly proud that you wrote this. Please keep up the AMAZING work.
Guest chapter 24 . 10/25/2015
Thank you for giving a " shout out " for some of your favorite stories . I will be reading them because I have a need to experience more of world from Edwards view .
I'm enjoying your work :-)
Guest chapter 23 . 10/25/2015
Thank you for your writings . I too can't seem to get enough of the " Twilight " experience , and I am enjoying your ideas .
debslmac chapter 56 . 8/26/2015
So sad, but loved it
whilewewereyetsinners chapter 56 . 7/23/2014
I've read several "gap between Twilight and New Moon" stories, and this is the only one that addressed that Edward was likely to still be very conflicted about staying with Bella. All those emotions he was struggling with after James brutalized Bella weren't going to just go away because Bella freaked out at him from her hospital bed. I think there was always part of him that not only doubted he would be able to stay with her, but felt that he didn't deserve to stay with her. Thanks for sharing this!
Narges chapter 24 . 5/22/2014
Thi story is a great interpretation from Edward's POV . I like it :-)
Jessica314 chapter 56 . 4/25/2014
I know you wrote this a long time ago, but I still wanted to review and let you know this story was absolutely terrific. Not only did you have the characters down pat but you managed to provide a natural bridge between the two books, connecting the two emotional climates in a way that made perfect sense, while giving everyone a huge dose of great storytelling. It really makes the beginning of New Moon even more believable. And the end here is so, so tragic!

Very, very well done!
Motherof8 chapter 56 . 3/9/2014
You did a great job. Only read last two chapter for now. Always hated what Edward did to her. It was kind of arrogant of him not to give her a choice. Thanks for a great story.
Motherof8 chapter 55 . 3/9/2014
Great chapter. Hate new moon Edward.
Narges chapter 35 . 3/2/2014
poor Charlie :(
Narges chapter 33 . 3/2/2014
it's a really good story. I liked this chapter.
Colgatesbabe chapter 56 . 10/23/2013
Amazing story capturing Edwards thoughts and feelings how I imagined they would be. I do hope u do a sequel to this story.
Caz1105 chapter 56 . 3/7/2013
Checked out the ending of this story before I started. Sorry I can't read anything with a sad ending. But Pinned was great xxx
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