|Reviews for Evening Star|
| whilewewereyetsinners chapter 56 . 7/23/2014
I've read several "gap between Twilight and New Moon" stories, and this is the only one that addressed that Edward was likely to still be very conflicted about staying with Bella. All those emotions he was struggling with after James brutalized Bella weren't going to just go away because Bella freaked out at him from her hospital bed. I think there was always part of him that not only doubted he would be able to stay with her, but felt that he didn't deserve to stay with her. Thanks for sharing this!
| Narges chapter 24 . 5/22/2014
Thi story is a great interpretation from Edward's POV . I like it :-)
| Jessica314 chapter 56 . 4/25/2014
I know you wrote this a long time ago, but I still wanted to review and let you know this story was absolutely terrific. Not only did you have the characters down pat but you managed to provide a natural bridge between the two books, connecting the two emotional climates in a way that made perfect sense, while giving everyone a huge dose of great storytelling. It really makes the beginning of New Moon even more believable. And the end here is so, so tragic!
Very, very well done!
| Motherof8 chapter 56 . 3/9/2014
You did a great job. Only read last two chapter for now. Always hated what Edward did to her. It was kind of arrogant of him not to give her a choice. Thanks for a great story.
| Motherof8 chapter 55 . 3/9/2014
Great chapter. Hate new moon Edward.
| Narges chapter 35 . 3/2/2014
poor Charlie :(
| Narges chapter 33 . 3/2/2014
it's a really good story. I liked this chapter.
| Colgatesbabe chapter 56 . 10/23/2013
Amazing story capturing Edwards thoughts and feelings how I imagined they would be. I do hope u do a sequel to this story.
| Caz1105 chapter 56 . 3/7/2013
Checked out the ending of this story before I started. Sorry I can't read anything with a sad ending. But Pinned was great xxx
| kalizivis chapter 56 . 2/17/2013
Thank you for a wonderful story. The beginning was a bit too emotionally verbose but I understand you were capturing the tortured soul of Edward. Great job!
| Guest chapter 56 . 12/15/2012
Thanks that was 1 of my fav fanfictions.
| JamesandLilly4eva chapter 30 . 12/9/2012
I absolutely love reading EPOV stories, and yours has been the best so far! Not many people truely understand how to wright these stories as they always seem to change the characters traits but you understand the characters completely and so far I love your book, i've been reading it all yesterday and today and i love it! Your an amazing author :D
| Fadedwranglers chapter 32 . 12/2/2012
Ok... so I am reading this on my smartphone and have tried several times after previous chapters to leave a review because "THIS STORY IS AWESOME!". Sorry for the caps but when you have to yell you have to yell. I finally broke down and got on my computer to post this review. I will keep it simple. You are very gifted. I am a avid reader consuming 5 to 10 books per week and I have to say your story is one of the best. May you be prolific and have a very long and lovely life in which to continue bringing your muse into the world. Thank you very much.
| IThinkINeededThat chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
I love 'From Edward's POV stories. Looks like this one is full of EddieAngst:)
| fanficlass chapter 56 . 9/22/2012
I have very much loved reading Evening Star! It's excellent and I hope you write more. I love reading stories from Edward's pov.