|Reviews for The Merchant's Daughter|
| Hi chapter 5 . 1/5
Please update, I wanna know who it is! Is it Char? Or someone else?
| Rosie chapter 5 . 11/26/2013
I know it's been a while since your last update but… PLEASE UPDATE! I love this story, it is AMAZING! Please, please, please continue it!
| Guest chapter 5 . 11/10/2013
How on earth could you ABANDON me right now? I can't believe that you ended with that cliffhanger! I was enjoying this story soooo much!
| Elelith chapter 5 . 9/29/2013
Lovely fic... Is it abandoned?
| Hugz Kissez chapter 5 . 9/16/2013
Does James fancy Ella? Why did I use the word fancy?
| pleasewrite chapter 5 . 9/5/2013
i torture myself reading these because NO ONE ever finishes . i hope u do. even if its a throw together ending just reunite em please
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/1/2013
OMGOMGOMG what's gonna happen? Please update soon!
| Silent Reader chapter 5 . 7/20/2013
Is it James? Oh, PLEASE update! I have to know what happens next!
| Gen-in-the-Eve chapter 5 . 7/11/2013
There are so few good Ella Enchanted stories out there, and I was delighted to discover yours, which I hope is concluded at some point. I always have thought the mark of a good writer is one who includes world-building, background details casually, so as to give the story a sense of extending beyond the particulars. For instance, the line about the handkerchiefs and the wedding dress was not only extremely funny and quite creative, but in the casual mention of a name, Helen, gave the impression of a much larger world than the principal characters. I'm interested to see where you plan on going from here, and hope to have that pleasure soon.
| PercabethPrincess393 chapter 5 . 6/23/2013
OMGOMGOMGOMG! Can u please write more soon?! That is such a Big cliff hanger! Was that person James? Is that his name? Sorry I forgot.:/ but no matter! Update soon! It is SUPER COOLIO!:)
| Queen of the Slackers chapter 5 . 6/19/2013
James is back? The glint from the boot would suggest so, but I suppose he's not going to be the only person with a knife tucked into his boot... But he did say he'd be back for her...
I love cliffhangers!
Anyway, I really like this story, it's sweet.
| Guest chapter 5 . 5/30/2013
:-) -) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) I love it! It's amazing! best story evahhhhh!
| Leah F chapter 5 . 4/12/2013
Please, Please, PLEASE CONTINUE!
| Ashley chapter 5 . 4/5/2013
Why is there no more? PLEASE update !
| KellyBallerina chapter 5 . 3/30/2013
Keep writing, please!