Reviews for 5:7 and 5:8 Uncertainty: Dempsey and Makepeace
xLaramiex chapter 19 . 3/30/2011
Sweet. This has been a great story, thanks for sharing.
xLaramiex chapter 18 . 3/30/2011
I didn't realise gibbons were renowned for grinning :P
xLaramiex chapter 17 . 3/30/2011
Ooh, tense...reading on.
xLaramiex chapter 16 . 3/30/2011
It's true, he totally talks with his eyebrows.
Duann chapter 19 . 3/21/2011
I was really touched when Dempsey tried to convince them Harry deserved a promotion! he's an Ace! had fund reading the Post post script. some things will never change
Blooky chapter 19 . 3/21/2011
I hope this isn't your last story?
Blooky chapter 18 . 3/21/2011
For a moment there, I thought you would have gone with angst and therefore no baby. I guess their relationship will be out in the open soon;).
Blooky chapter 16 . 3/21/2011
Wow, I'm still amazed at your talent for suspense...it's almost impossible to take the time to review before reading the next chapter;).
Blooky chapter 13 . 3/21/2011
Very into character I think. Dempsey would be the one to be happy about the baby and Harry the one to get rid of it. But things can still change, because abortion is something you have to live with for the rest of your life.
Blooky chapter 12 . 3/21/2011
It's funny how Harry would think that her body would perform the illusion of being pregnant. Somebody's in denial;). It's interesting that she's actually pregnant during this case. You successfully kept me guessing whether she would or wouldn't be;).
xWhiteKnightx chapter 19 . 3/20/2011
Out in the open, the end of an era!

No more hiding in the bathroom of hotel rooms when they are caught on the hop!
xLaramiex chapter 15 . 3/20/2011
Such a tense chapter! Very well written m'dear :)
Slyquinn chapter 19 . 3/17/2011
Glad everyone is getting what they want. Well, as for Harry we'll have to wait to find out I guess.

Boy Dempsey really vouched for her.

Come on Makepeace you're pregnant, stay put.

The dynamic duo... lol

- Dempsey grinned "So this isn't work then?". ... I see where he's going...

- this new phenomenon of Dempsey and Makepeace; tell me about it :-(

Cuuuuuuuute, not so secretive anymore are we Harry!

Oh not Lacey, never liked him, who would? Hoping he won't ruin it for Harry!

Dempsey is the best street-smart character ever...
Slyquinn chapter 18 . 3/17/2011
- With his thumb James gently wiped each eye dry but that didn't help at all. You softy, I loved it though...

- "Hey we can still do lot's tryin'?". OMG lol

- "to find the lone ranger and bring him back to the ranch" Happy no one burst Dempsey's bubble...

- "She'll be like her mum and break all the moulds 'n still be the best Yankee catcher of the next century" True, he's boasting, nice.

Happy Dempsey had someone to celebrate with... Mac ;-)

I could so imagine Dempsey showing off the pics. Loved Harry talking to baby, revealing her "secret" love. Funny, sure she's mad in love but not showing...

Last line was a pisser, as always, Spikings on the T.
Helenj chapter 19 . 3/17/2011
I first read this yesterday and the image of Dempsey getting his gun out is still making me laugh out loud. Spikings obviously finds it hilarious too.

What a turn around for Dempsey too. He would have agreed with the idiots before he worked with Harry and there is no way he could have restrained himself in the pub.

I love the way the blokes just accepted them as a couple without too much fuss. None of them are really surprised.

I think I'm going to re-read all your stories until hopefully we get the wedding!
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