Reviews for Only a child
zivlerad chapter 4 . 4/25
que paso que no la terminaste? X D fue buena quede intrigada con la historia de como iva a continuar..
Guest chapter 5 . 6/8/2014
Really nice story i hope you update
LoveGohan chapter 2 . 2/2/2014
What's happening here?
Hektols chapter 5 . 5/27/2013
Like a lot the idea of the Kais training a protector for the Universe, that should have happened in the original.

So Goten has a little sister? Let's hope that Gohan meets Goten and her soon.
Hektols chapter 4 . 5/27/2013
Poor Goku and Chichi, wonder if their marriage will bear that lost.
Hektols chapter 3 . 5/27/2013
Good work.
Hektols chapter 2 . 5/27/2013
Great work, Goku will have to explaina a lot of things back at home.
Hektols chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
Very interesting idea to have Gohan making the sacrifice instead of Goku, wonder if Cell will be back.
Ky111 chapter 5 . 6/21/2012
Wow what a great story hope to see it continue and get past all this teary stuff. To see what happens
Raining Winter chapter 5 . 5/18/2012
wow another child agirl it will be intersting is going gohan coming during buu or anther villian is anyway update soon
ultimate saiyan chapter 5 . 12/29/2011
An update from you at last Gttm ... WOOOOOPPPPPPPPPP :D Darling in the search or forgiveness bit you accidently deleted something im guessing "The f yes as he lifted his head up. "Your right Bulma...maybe he is being like how I was... was this how people felt when I died?""

but other then that good work, hope things are well for you and all AND UPDATE SOON!
dragonsonic1 chapter 4 . 12/26/2011
is he a kai? i love your story its my first story on here i cant wait to read the next chapter!
Kakarot Son chapter 5 . 12/26/2011
Merry Christmas G!

An update at last, eh?

Great chapter, G, a few tiny mistakes, but as you said you didn't have spell checker, the robot fight scene was really good. It's great to see that you still haven't lost your touch :D

So Goku's got another daughter huh? I wonder what you'll make of that...

If you want inspiration for this story, scratch that, if you want a great read on a topic pretty similar to this, look up a story called Family Portrait by Red Roses2.

Update soon!

P.S. A little heads up, Devil's a bit busy atm so you might have to wait a little for it to be Beta read.

Kaka
gohan90 chapter 5 . 12/25/2011
Good story but the first couple chapters seemed to drag on a bit like you kept putting of gohans death and you are only now just getting into the real story.

In chap 4 you had the supreme kai say that gohan is unusually strong for a half saiyan and that half-saiyans tend to be weaker then a full saiyan does this mean that goten and trunks will be weaker then in canon because i like them but always hated that they were super saiyans especially since to unlocking super saiyan you need to train ALOT and you need a very strong emotional trigger and they are stronger then future trunks even though he trained alot and went through alot of hard stuff that would have made him strong and they hardly even train so it made no sense to me for them to be as strong as they were in canon.

In most of the gohan dies type stories i have read when he comes back to life he is like 17 and that always pisses me off because if he is dead then he should not be aging so i hope you dont do something like that.

The story its self seems very interesting even though its only starting i am wondering what kibito and shin mean when they talk about gohan being "him" the only 2 things i can think of are a kind of chosen one that saves the universe or somekind of reincarnation of someone from along time ago from reading their conversation it makes me think he is a kind of reincarnation for some reason not sure why i think that but that seems like the more likely choice for some reason.

Hope for an update soon.
Son Goshen chapter 5 . 12/24/2011
The last part made me completely ;_;. . Awesome chapter! Looks like Goku has a daughter now. :DDDDD Write more when you can, don't rush.

(And yeah, TDS for the win!)
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