Reviews for Unspoken
Makenzie chapter 1 . 9/14/2017
Ommg omg omg omg omg omg o.g omg omg omg im ded...YOU ARE THE BOMB!
Ash chapter 1 . 8/30/2017
I think it was good it had amazing detail, but I think it could still have a bit more romance.
azayan chapter 2 . 8/8/2017
oh... It's over already? damn.
Azayan chapter 1 . 8/8/2017
Good start. I don't like when it's to slow before ''action'' but maybe this was a little quick... You asked for criticism so...
I think the POV happen to quickly, it can be good to wonder a bit longer what the other partie was actually thinking and I would have liked to see a Zero that stay more in his personnage.
I like were this is going and I will continue reading!
Guest chapter 2 . 6/19/2017
Umm awww! To cute!
Blue chapter 1 . 6/19/2017
Good. Not the best, but good...:D
nashaly3229 chapter 1 . 8/6/2016
this whole story is so cute! I wish i was longerrr
kiryu chapter 2 . 2/16/2016
could you write more please i love it
Xali chapter 2 . 12/22/2015
Guest chapter 1 . 7/17/2015
Guest chapter 2 . 6/13/2015
Guest chapter 1 . 6/13/2015
Great make more!
jacii.vasquez chapter 2 . 1/5/2015
ahhh i love it make another please
Guest chapter 2 . 12/28/2014
Write more! I need to see a cute hook up here!
yuki kuran chapter 2 . 7/25/2014
great i love iy can you make more i would love to read more thanks
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