Reviews for Same As It Never Was
Cobray chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Yessssss I new seventhe story it's the greatest X-mas/New Year Interim present a girl could wish for.
P.O.KILLER chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Positively breathtaking... I was contemplating reviewing this in the morning, because I wanted to let it sink in, but then I decided that maybe you'd want an initial response to a 9,000 word piece.

Writing: beautiful,haunting,intuitive,grasping, free of errors (none that my eye could catch). It was nearly flawless. On a critical note, there were times when you repeated words in the same paragraph or exchange, and it sounded a bit clunky. And also, using abbreviations seemed a bit lazy and disrupted the flow. I suggest using full names like Balamb Garden.

Plot: So far, it's extremely well thought out and realistic. The relationship that you've portrayed between Squall and Rinoa is heart-wrenching, deep and extremely relateble (I relate to it soo deeply in fact) I'm completely enthralled in this story and I can't wait to read the next chapter :)

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