Reviews for Precocious Crush |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I can't believe I didn't watch Kick-Ass until 202frickin'4. My fault, knew about when it came out. But that also means I wasn't here to thank, encourage, and lay the compliments on thick for this incredible story while it was posting I've consumed alot of Kick-Ass/Hit Girl fanfic recently (of course) and this is by far my favorite. I enjoyed the pacing, ALL the 'character building' chapters, getting inside Mindy's head, the arc(sl of the storyit is my favorite Hit Girl story A decade-plus of writing one story is a giant chunk o time and, yes it is far from completed, but for me, this is as strong and true a follow-up to Kick-Ass as the KA2 movie or the comics. It's as valid a 'multiverse' entry as them. I am now following this story. Yes, 3 years after the last entry. You commented in one of the chapters that you will get this finshed before you turn 80. And I am holding you to it. As a (semi) retired fafic writer , I understand burnout, and inspiration blocks, discouraging comments by folks who want you to write something different into the story, and your own desire to just write other stories that are filling your mind I will wait patiently yr srvt. Qwerty |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. Just reread a lot of this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder if that story will ever continu. Well it was nice for a while. Ièstill hope it will eventually continu. It is one of the most sincere story I have read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story! Finished my reread and it's still one of my favorite fanfics. Hope you are doing well and can get back to this great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't believe I read 267 chapters and practically nothing happened between them. I didn't really have expectations about grown-up stuff and all, but their relationship didn't advance much. Anyway, I liked most of the story, it's really really good! But the slow pace just left me very disappointed. PS: My English is not that good and I'm Brazilian, most of the text was translated by the translator, I hope you can understand what I mean. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello. This is certainly one of the best M-rated Kick-Ass stories I've seen and, considering Mindy being Mindy, it's one of the Kick-Ass stories I've seen in general. Sure, the length of the chapters varies a lot and sometimes the important things (meaning the progress on Mindy bedding Dave) happen way too slow (even if each chapter was 5-10 times longer, we'd still have 26-50 chapters of them), but it's still interesting, fun, has quite a few characters etc. I kinda couldn't understand why they couldn't just sneak into Chris' room at night and just kill him. With JF they could create a diversion and Mind and Dave would attack from another direction or something. Anyway, I don't really mind Katie (I actually feel bad for her here) and I don't exactly mind Riley either, but poor Mindy... she only wanted Dave by her side and inside... Too bad it hadn't happened yet. I'm hoping you haven't abandoned this, as it just got to the interesting part, meaning that Mindy finally has boobs! Anyway, good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looking forward to more of this story. It's very interesting |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally I have some time to read some chapters. Between work and studies I've barely been able to read in these months. It's a bit disappointing because I really love this fic and I hope you update soon. "Have you ever had that feeling that things are going so well that something has to be about to blow up? That's how I feel." "With how well everything is going, is it any wonder I can't help but feel like everything is going to go to hell at any moment? Or maybe I'm just paranoid..." Yes, I've had that feeling many times. I think you have to be cautious and be prepared... but what's the point? I've read that Chloë Grace Moretz wants to reprise her role as Mandy/Hit Girl as an adult for Kick ass 3. Along with Aaron Taylor-Johnson and Christopher Mintz-Plasse. The interview is on YouTube and is from The Tonight Show. See why I feel like things are going well? I hope they make the third movie someday. I never lost faith xD Sting's character is interesting. I'll keep reading when I can and a little at a time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, how are you? I'm a Latin American reader and like everyone else, I'm a big fan of the Kick ass movies and Dave and Mindy's couple. I love your story, please give it the ending it deserves, you have everything to easily turn this story into the best Dave and Mindy fic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Katie does not know how to measure her enemies well, she thinks that the dangerous girl is the girl from the ice cream parlor and that Mindi is just a girl who does not present competition and of course between competing with a girl and a woman prefers to have the girl, than wrong is XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() He complains about spiderman but at least Marvel has a more stable timeline than DC, seriously, for DC you need a concept map like those big police planks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Those were some good chapters. I think it was a good resource the chapter before, since it really built up suspence! You really know how to keep going on interesting storylines. I feel bad for the story having a IRL background. But art keeps touching real life. Hope you have a nice day! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh rayos! Ahora todo tiene sentido jejeje voy a empezar a sentirme menos enojada ahora |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tengo muchas ganas de leer lo que pasará a continuación con Mindy y su embarazo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oohff. This hits hard. The situation is already painful but to Mindy's own history would just compound the trauma. Really good chapter. I'm glad you took the time to get it right, because I think you really did. |