Reviews for Mated Forever
faletoimj chapter 37 . 4/2
great story, just wish you could add some more to your chapters. They are too short. Just saying. Update soon please...
ASKMEHOW chapter 37 . 1/17/2014
Like the story, but when do you plan to finish it ?
VampireAngel99 chapter 37 . 1/16/2014
please continue, it's a great story!
Dangerlee chapter 37 . 11/3/2013
are you ever going to continue tthis story? it's really good...
silversimon chapter 21 . 7/29/2013
Just began reading this story. Parts have been enjoyable. Several inconsistent points. In the earliest chapters she and Jasper already discussed the when and how of her change. They decided to turn her during her first week at the Cullens. Yet in this chapter it's presented as a whole new question. And why install a kitchen and full bathroom in her attic studio when everyone knew she would be turned before it would be gifted to her at Christmas? And in neither lemon scene was there a single kiss? You also seemed to lose the timeline of events the day Emmett lost his cock, the girls went shopping for art studio decor, disassembly of her truck etc. I'm not sure if a lot of time passed between posting chapters lead to these problems ... or if the brevity of the chapters contributed. I.e., one day chapter instead of ten may help you keep things better organized in your mind, writing. Nothing you can't fix. Trying to be constructive not mean. Personally your extremely short chapters are irritating even reading it all at once. Best wishes.
TwilightAddict71484 chapter 37 . 7/27/2013 post again soon.
I heart vamps chapter 37 . 7/24/2013
Please update soon
Olivia Williams chapter 37 . 7/13/2013
typical male lol
jenn008 chapter 37 . 7/13/2013
Update soon!
barbiedoll123 chapter 3 . 7/6/2013
I love Jasper
barbiedoll123 chapter 2 . 7/6/2013
I can't wait
barbiedoll123 chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
Love it awesome
toomanycats21 chapter 37 . 7/4/2013
yes i love it update soon please
Babysis64 chapter 37 . 7/3/2013
nope this was a good chapter update and yes I do hope they find out what is going on and I hope that Peter is okay with his ex wife being killed and Bella's grandmother. I hope that the Cullen Whitlock coven's are going to come out okat in the end of all what is going on right.
Sarahamanda Klaine chapter 37 . 7/3/2013
I like this chapter. It is a good chapter.
Please update soon.
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