Reviews for For Tomorrow We Die |
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![]() ![]() THIS. IS. GoT level shit you're pukking here. Successful pulling. |
![]() ![]() Easy, face plates. Not that squishy thing you have in YOUR face. |
![]() ![]() So the pauper princess payed a piper? Marvelous! |
![]() ![]() Ah, bloody fukken knew it. Fake News galore, more elaborate written and it would be Mass Effect of Thrones (well, Council seats?) and now we know what happen with those... sleeper agents from the 1st contact war. But, whoa, Councilor!? Who'd ever guessed? Besides some conspiracy nuts... I wonder if this was TIM, but no, I think it was one of the other players, perhaps the Broker? |
![]() ![]() Sounds like a plan, Reegar. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What in all hells do you do to my feels!? |
![]() ![]() ![]() The speech at the con clave was the best ever depiction of the Gath |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your depiction of Jack I feel like everybody either per trays her as a horrible person and she always stays that way or she finds redemption and become sister sweet nice person which I feel like both would really happen you kind of split the difference and I feel like that’s exactly the way she would’ve been |
![]() ![]() ![]() I forgot how good things death was written it actually made me cry |
![]() ![]() ![]() So good |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is one of my favorite fanfics ever. I literally cried when Legion died. I was so hopeful that he might come back somehow, after you put in that line about how he still managed to upload his collated data to the hub, even if they didn't integrate it since he didn't have the correct coding. Even if this wasn't a LegionXTali fic like I searched for, his major role in this story was very appreciated. Your characterizations of all the characters was great. I cried when Thane died, especially so early on. A lot of what you added gave the universe more realism, especially when describing technical and physical settings. There were a few lines that made me shake my head, but only three made me wish you hadn't left them in. Wish I kept track to help you out, but I powered through the whole thing in one sitting, hanging on every word. Great job! |
![]() ![]() Very few stories can make me tear up. Very, very few can make me cry. Congratulations. The first ending was a bittersweet masterpiece. The alternate pressed all my feel-good buttons. I don't know which I prefer more. Errors: 411319 instead of 413319 in Chapter 68. Also, occasionally, a minor word is dropped in a sentence, making me read it twice to understand it. PS: I originally clicked in a vain hope for Tali romance. My hope was not gratified. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just wanted to say that I truly enjoyed reading your story, the characterization was fantastic, and I thought your focus on the role of the Geth made for a very exciting and believable read. The sheer complexity of the various factions and organizations all politicking with one another really helped to explain why the galaxy had been ignoring the Reapers and was out to get Shepard. It really made the small victories Shepard and crew were able to achieve worth so much more. I enjoyed playing through ME3 (ending aside), but your plot would have made for a fantastic game as well. Thanks very much for a great read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's about time someone else realized that the 'rogue cell' argument simply *reeks* of plausible deniability... A lot of the, shall we say less-skilled ME fanthors seem to love to play up the mad-science aspect of Cerberus's research divisions to try to make the organization seem more eeeeeeeeeeeeeeevil, but really they just need to be called out on the stuff they've already done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm, while I'm intrigued to see more of the turian angle here, Garrus's behavior has this weird, bro-y, acquisitive vibe to it that doesn't seem in character for him or for turians in general. Hmeh, it's probably just me being paranoid after subjecting myself to waaay too many of the worst of the worst of the Shekarian sub-genre. |