Reviews for Rhymes With Confusion
juu chapter 1 . 8/9/2014
This was wonderful.
Such a great idea with the magnets and poems.
Very well written. Thanks for sharing.
parkrstark chapter 1 . 2/10/2014
This is amazing. I love this. Definitely my favorite Javi/kevin fic. The rhyming is amazing. This overall is a masterpiece.
angeltrin1 chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
Nice and quite cute and sweet! I love the progression of their relationship. Thanks for writing this.
endmylifeohmygod chapter 1 . 5/15/2013
I loved this.
Frostylock chapter 1 . 3/10/2013
3 Loved it! That was so cute! I loved the poem at the end too. It was soo cute!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
I wish I was as good as writing rhyme as you are. Mine turn out wonky and lopsided. Really well done, this was soooo great!
Fan girl chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
I.K. Holdrige chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
You must have spent a long time finding words to rhyme with each other! I would've never been able to do that!

This was just too awesome to not be reviewed! Got hooked in this pairing just about a week ago and they got me heads over heels for them :D

You did a great job!


ZeldaLove Akira-Chan
Blessed24 7 chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
I was totally loving this piece. The fun little poems and Ryan asking Castle for help so he would create the perfect message. BUT, I really don't think the second and third to last lines about Ryan being "the girl" are necessary. I think it should have ended with "comfortably domestic partnership." and then the ending(beginning) phrase. (I really loved how you played out the ending line, btw.)
safa56bmc chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
ooo i love it..i really do..
Emily chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
I never really liked this pairing until I read your story but this is just tooooooo cute!

Emily xxx
Tasumi Castrogiovanni chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
this is adorable. The rhyming is fantastic!
D.B.R Hazlewoode chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
I really must say

This is the best I've read all day.

I have to admit that, just maybe,

It made me a little bit crazy.

I loved it so much,

I think your words had the magic touch.

I guess I really can't rhyme,

But at least I took the time.

(And in all my delusion,

I can't find a word that rhymes with confusion)
Aiatalay chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
This story is a wonderfully lighthearted glimpse into the best part of this relationship- the way they play with each other. I love the way this extends into romance, it fits their relationship well.
water kangaroo chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
JEEZ cut back on the cuteness level! My squealing and jumping around almost woke everyone up! God damn it these two need to realize how in love they really are :D
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