Reviews for A New Evans
Lunasilverfrost chapter 3 . 2/15
Soul X Maka chapter 3 . 8/5/2016
Bruh where is da next chapter?!
Hi chapter 3 . 7/5/2016
Ok nvm just 4 But I was wondering will Ghost ever confess to Osaka and will we get to see more kid?
Hi chapter 3 . 7/5/2016
Great but I find a great lack of the word "asked" if you could throw that in that would be great! Also I think 4 or 5 would be a great thing to do
Eatinglollipops chapter 3 . 6/26/2016
I actually really want to see how they all handle going to Shibusen and going on their first mission and stuff like that.
KenzyElric chapter 1 . 3/1/2016
Great! Thanks
Mystic Mists chapter 3 . 2/26/2016
I very like the story, it's amazing! It's very funny too, fake marriage, very?! Well anyways I want Osaka and Ghost fluff, they're just like Maka and Soul! Very cute! So please continue, I'll like that! If possible can you add a little Maka and Soul parts, pwease?! Also can you add Maka chops, those are funny or any kind of chops on the head! Well awesome chapters
Angry Chick chapter 2 . 9/28/2015
This was...adorable
Great job
No complaints
Angry Chick; Fanfiction Critic
AnimeJunkie13 chapter 3 . 7/5/2015
I think you should do a mix of all of them together. I really like your story lines. I think it follows the Anime pretty well. But I guess a long with the kids, I think it might be nice to see some more interaction with the Kidd, Maka, Soul, Liz, Patty, Black Star, and Tsubaki. Seeing how they catch up, and how they interact with the kids. But it's not really my place to say anything. Just keep doing you! I love this series i guess you would call it. Sorry. I'm new to this site.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/8/2015
Stein x marie 4ever chapter 1 . 10/19/2014
I already read this for three times but now I understand the light and heart name...hehe
I hope you continue a new story like this
Guest chapter 3 . 6/6/2014
3 and 2
candy kitten chapter 3 . 4/16/2014
Awwwwwwwn ! So ghost really does have feeling for Osaka ?! What are the children weapon or misterest ? Keep continueing your doing great ! ; D
mimi bailey chapter 3 . 4/5/2014
skelekc chapter 3 . 1/31/2014
Veryv swe sweet I wanna kno y bluestar doesn't like her tho
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