|Reviews for Dear Maggie Oneshot|
| rpattzdiani chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
shocked! major great shocked! i never thought that worse edward past, poor edward. I read dear maggie first then this one shoot, well thats xpained everything brooding edward, but i was wondering he straight rite? no weird sex male thing, i mean since his mother kinda sold him to a man. Cant wait to next update DM, Ty
| DrmngofEC chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
So how faced paced will it be as far as their relationship goes?
I hope it doesn't drag out for a crap load of chapters.
| tff000 chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
read the first chapter to dear maggie and to read this o/s. e's past, very sad. to understand what has led him to his anger. looking forward to the full story
| Courtney37 chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
AWW! i'm reading this o/s bc of the continued story and I saw it was here, so I HAD to check it out. I'm so happy I did. I can't believe Edward's mom is a freak of freaking nature! stupid woman. I'm so glad he was adopted but he is probably one screwed up guy unforunately :( I can't wait to read more of the continued piece. :D thanks bye for now
| rubell chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
lol...they had sex on the baseball diamond? how hott is that! huge fantasy of mine! that and a football field, lol, sports whore! hope at some point you do decide to turn this into a multi, it totally deserves it, just gotta find the time...i am author alerting you so you are stuck with me till the end of fandom!
| justwanttoread chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
This could be an awesome full story! Loved it!
| parkesy23 chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
| KNG1986 chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
That was very intense both physically and emotionally. I can't wait to read more.
| Sherry80 chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
wow i want more how they met this would be such a great story cant wait
| gitgit chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
ill be looking forward to see your story posted as a multichapter
intense first chapter thats for sure... I hope bella beats up maggie!
| mrskebab chapter 1 . 1/6/2011
Awwww wow that was awesome x
| Kyuketsuki In Oki chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
I couldn't tell - was this during the day? It doesn't seem like it was, but then again, who'd be hitting baseballs at night unless the field was lighted? Either way - weren't either of them worried that someone would see them?
I'm looking forward to this fic!
| twilight1972 chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
Oh my this sounds like a wonderful, wonderful story. I want more - just like Bella.
| browneyed33baby chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
This was great! I can't wait for the actual story :)
| Lilypad10 chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
I feel so bad bad for him! What a horrible mother to do that to her child. She loves him so much! Does he still whore around and that is why he can not give himself to Bella?