|Reviews for Dear Maggie Oneshot|
| cejsmom chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Very interesting story Jenny! What a hurt/confused/broken person Edward is. I look forward to reading more of this tale. What a dream!
| Clynne chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
I like it, can't wait for more.
| claireoth chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
SEE I TOLD YOU HOW MANY MILLION MONTHS AGO THAT I NEEDED TO CLIMB INSIDE THIS ONE AND HUG EDWARD SENSELESS?
| Treya chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Very interesting. I'd like to see where the story takes us.
| TwiAggie94 chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Great start. I hope in the new year we learn more of this e&b. Enjoyed on twilighted. Meg
| chele the original chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
much as I hate what was done to him and what he had to do, You did an excellent job with your characters.
| smilton chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Wow! That was not what I was expecting. But it was still great, I really can't wait to until this becomes a story!
| avidreader69 chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
I can only imagine the pain he will have to go through to deal with his past. But I so want them to get through it together.
| cantbewithoutedward chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
| TwilightKrazy chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
This is really cute. Maybe you could continue this...?
| djsmommie chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
OH I can't wait for more of this!
| amwine chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Wow...very interesting. I hope there will be more. Great job...thanks!
| Cullenfan524 chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Wow that was so good...and so sad! So his mother sold him to men! Wow that is just SICK! And I don't understand...did he continue in prostitution after he left her? This looks really good!
| deanna127 chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
I kept waiting for the sprinklers to come on and douse them out of the sex haze. Ha! It was pretty steamy, but I just couldn't get past the baseball field... those places are usually lit up so bright at night, not to mention crowded. Oh and a black Mariner's hat is just wrong; navy blue, turquoise, even white if you absolutely have to but not black.
I like the premise of the story... Edward seems impossibly damaged. Good job, as always
| wheather79 chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Loved it! I think it going to make a great multi-chapter fic very angsty! Can't wait! :)