|Reviews for Via Infinite|
| mopotter17 chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
Aww, another death fic *loves* it's like you want me to cry now, right? Another short but sweet fic, I love the discussion on eternity and shadows and bringing it back in the end. A cute, yet sadistic way to shed some light on the subject for the fic x3
And man does Allen's whole name sounds weird coming from Kanda o.0 ;[
| BlindBeyondSight chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
Hn. Loving the subtext (italics). You did a brilliant job with balancing out two "stories" in one. You kept both in character (thank goodness) and used their personalities to this story's advantage.
It was tragic, but would've been even more devastating had there been more scenes of a connection between the two of them. But that probably wasn't that necessary anyway considering this was a drabble or something of the variety.
I love the image of the two meeting as shadows on concrete. Very strong image there, I can almost see it like a small play or something. A beautiful image to leave off on.
Lovely use of characterization and your writing style is effortless and smooth. Thanks for the amazing story :)
| SragonZ chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
Hmm...I did actually like this one :)
It's sad though...
I don't think Kanda was out of character, however :\
| waterlit chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
This was really sad. It wasn't just sad; it was haunting and beautiful and oh, I can't think of any better words to describe it. Good job (:
| EXO718 chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Part 2? Poor Allen!
| Error101 chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
But I loved it, especially the ending...
Very nice story :D
| judalscock chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
is it ok to cry like a sissyT_T because thats what im doing right now! it sucks allen didnt come back but at least kanda wasnt being an ass! i love your story!
| PaTitoChan chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
You know, I tried reading the story outloud..but when i got to the part of the goodbyes my voice wouldnt come out and then the tears started.. You have some SERIOUS talent here! i have favored all your stories and i just cant get enough of them! You have a way of transfering feelings through the stories that it is just...wow!
Well i just needed to get that out hehe..(:
Keep Writing! Your Awesome!
| HinLove chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
hahaha, it was hard reading through these tears xD
Damnit why do I have to cry .
thank you btw, it was really beautifull.