Reviews for She Wakes Up
KetsuBear chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
OH MY GAWD! ARTHUR NOOOOOOO! T-T Poor poor ariadne...i cant imagine the pain she must feel when she wakes up and finds him dead on the floor...
TardisBluePen chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
well that was intense. 0_0

poor Ariadne, it was horrible to see how she was...for lack of better phrasing, "slowly going mad", maybe? and how she eventually just gave up...ultimately depressing. but this was very well written, and said a lot, considering how short each segment was. I almost cried at the end, when she kept shooting Arthur... :'[ but really really good job on this, the emotion was amazing, and the ending was amazing, and just...wow.

my lack of a constructive review (or even a review that made sense) was because I was kind of rendered speechless after this.

great work.
theredninja chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
Woah that is a hectic and depressing story :(
bluepianos chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
Oh, gods. You definitely captured the darker (and definitely intenser) side of this job.

Maybe Cobb was right. Coworkers should never get involved in this type of job.
Voldemort's Spawn chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
oh wow that was deep. The ugly side of the dreaming business. Whether or not he was real doesn't matter because she's lost her grip. Beautiful story.
Trina-D chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Wow! A really intense story. Good work.