|Reviews for Jumper|
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/18/2013
can you continue this please
| Lord Mortensen chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
amazing!, please update soon!
| NaruKuro chapter 2 . 9/10/2012
how about naruto x kurotsuchi of iwa for the pairing.
| Dimension Distorter chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
Bout time someone did this crossover
| puma1sunfire chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
Interesting Ideal. Pretty much would make good run at explaining the way he had his father's abilities as a bloodline.
| ChronoMitsurugi chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
The power of jumping is about freedom. Like flying. The ability to go anywhere anytime you want without normal human restrictions.
As for the electricity part. What it does is mess with the electrical signals in the body's nervous system making it incredibly hard to concentrate. Anyone who has ever been shocked knows how the body locks up and refuses to respond.
Now as "Jumper" has shown this is a great way to slow a jumper down. But with enough determination and concentration, jumping is still possible. And all fans of Naruto that our favorite blonde has the determination part in spades. Now he just needs practice.
Anyway looking forward to more.
| ranma hibiki chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
i think a naruto who has yet to graduate, is still heavy into pranking, and can jump anywhere is funny.
i think a naruto that can jump anywhere and has clones is SCARY..for the sanity of konoha! and i'll certainly love to watch what happens
| Breaniver chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
Great start. just a few questions.
1. did he get this from his mom, his dad, or a combination of the two?
2. who all knows about jumpers? given how it worked in the movie and the book, jumping is an excellent infiltration tool. If any village knows about this ability, then they will have done some research on countering it, and they will try to kidnap or kill any jumper from an enemy village.
3. are you going to go with the classic team 7? there would be more than a few problems there, given two lightning affinities
| shugokage chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
cool starting I hope to see it become something more
| fanofmany chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
Hmm expected him to travel the world and learn his way since Konoha stunts his growth but okay I guess.
| Twylyte chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
I hope you continue this. I've been working on a Naruto/Jumper cross over for ages now, practically since I first saw the movie, but it's taking a long time... I'd love to see how you do with this, it's already majorly different than my ideas.
| XandricTheBeater chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
Good story, nice intro, well explained powers. all around i like it. if you could i would like you to sometime read my story called Naruto the Mokuton Jumpher as it also has naruto having the teleportation bloodline and i want to see what you think of it
| D N Walker chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
intresting, very intresting as for the pairing i would like to go outside your usual suspects and go with Fu
| Manga154 chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
I was thinking that you would of made his dad a jumper who could not "jump" so he made that one jutsu. It says that minito (so?) was an orphan so it is an idea.
Good hub by the way
| Selonianth chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
has holes you could have written out and stuff but it's good.