oh, I wish that there was 1 more chapter, with EM being the one in protective custody too, and meeting them on the beach...sigh

oh so wonderful, and sad

Well done. Incredibly sad, but in some funny way that I can't quite put my finger on, hopeful.

Style, pace, rhythm spot on! An the touch of romanticism with such completely natural dialog and thought... What a well done piece. Thanks for sharing!

congrats on your Hopelss Romantic Award.

Story is so sad, but well written.

aww well that part is sadder...

But ok I take it.

I do think that you first O/s didn't needed that, but it's cool you wrote it anyway.

I wondered if E's death was due to James, I knew it could be a possibility but decided to think it was one of these 'life is so "ironic"' kind of moment lol. (and to tell you the truth, I like irony better)

although one could argue that James killing E *is* ironic lol

It's good, anyway

thanks (for having to point to me that there was more lol)

L.

Well I can say I really liked it.

It does sound like real life...

I like how the pieces works, and how they were each others hope, I guess.

How in a way, they still are.

I guess Alice will have a good life -I don't believe in "I won't be able to love anymore after you", I believe you don't love the same, in the same manner you don't love your kids or friends or fam the same way, but it doesn't mean you love them less. I don't know... I guess like for your drabble I see everything that's good-

It's a great story!

Thank you for writing it!

L.

Oh. My. Gosh. I cried!

This was so heartbreaking...and yet so amazing. You are an amazing author with a lot of talent! Keep writing :)

oxox,

Danni :)

Totally cried this time around! So as on both ends! Alice definitely went through a lot but she came out stronger in the end. You would that she would get her happily ever after. She deserves it. But life isn't like that! At least James went to jail. He's a sick bastard! I hope she can still be happy and I'm glad Dale is a happy healthy little boy and she has Bella. Incredible job! Loved it!

This is a sad, sad story, but beautifully written. I like it very much. Thanks for sharing!

Holy crap! you just broke my heart in one shot. Beautiful story.

That was a damn good fanfiction

This is a beautiful and heart-wrenching story. I wish they could have had more than just their one day together. Wonderful story!

Much love,

HM

Love your story,

best wishes, Linda

Alice has such a sad story. I am glad that you wrote this as there were a lot of unanswered questions about her life. So beautifully written and everything ties together perfectly. You are a natural at writing although I am sure that you put a lot of work and emotion into your story's... it shows in your writing. As always I loved it heaps.

OMG! I can't believe that something I did isnpired THIS!

Like I said before, I loved WA, it's so beautifully writen and sad and romantic and it's simply beautiful. And with Stormy Skies, you outdid yourself. It's still sad, but beautifully so, if that makes sense (Yes, I cried). And I loved that you stuck with the same theme for the tittle of this outtake.

Once again, thank you for creating something marvelous for the banner.

PS: Thanks for letting me know aout this btw

Nana,xoxo.