|Reviews for Mizuiro No Yuuki|
| jellyd chapter 8 . 3/16
Please write more stories, i love them!
| Althea Vestrit92 chapter 6 . 10/21/2014
I read this more than once, so... Thank you very much for posting it! It's amazing, I'm glad you posted it :)
| xXRedxRosesXx chapter 8 . 2/28/2013
I've read like all of these Takato/Jenrya fics before, but they still have me fangirling out. so so cute! I wish there were more!
| Takato the dreamer chapter 8 . 1/21/2013
Have a birthday? It Christmas? Just need a gift? Never fear: There's the all-purpose gift: The Digimon World Game!
:P I'm sorry, Ive just noticed that being a running thing in your fics, and I had to point it out XD
Great chap. You know, you write fics where Takato's dad isn't supportive, and I understand, and it's good to have variety in reactions, but, just, the way he was in the series... it's hard to imagine him as anything other than supportive. After all, Takato is trying to convince his mom he needs to do it, and he just walks off and starts making Guilmon bread, how is that not awesome? XD
(This review was NOT an any way complaining, just pointing out :) )
| Takato the dreamer chapter 7 . 1/20/2013
Quiiiit making Lianjie so freaking awesome
Great chap! And, nice turtle refrence XD I've noticed you guys sure like them! :)
| Takato the dreamer chapter 6 . 1/20/2013
Taiki, Ori, stop it, this fic is amazing XD
And I meant to comment last chap, that, I'm with Taiki, I want to see the rest of these "Horrible" Insomnia fics XD It's hard to believe anything you write could be horrible!
| Takato the dreamer chapter 5 . 1/19/2013
This was so awesome :)
Honestly, about being predictable, I had hoped that that would happen, obviously XD, but, You didn't show in Jenrya's thoughts until the last second, so that helped, I wasn't sure what he'd say. :)
| Takato the dreamer chapter 4 . 1/19/2013
Great chap, I like how you wrote Juri :)
| Takato the dreamer chapter 3 . 1/18/2013
Aww, I wanna know that Kazu wasn't straight! XD I mean, it seems like a long shot with all his checking out of women... but he sounds like he could possibly be Bi XD
| Takato the dreamer chapter 2 . 1/18/2013
You know... I honestly... and cant believe I did... forgot that whole "Ori will never write Kenta straight because the universe would implode" thing XD
Great chap :)
| Takato the dreamer chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
I love your multiple POV stories like this, very interested to see what Kenta has to say XD
| Riku Murasaki chapter 7 . 2/18/2011
Very nice. I think the last line was my favorite so far for this fic.
| Riku Murasaki chapter 4 . 2/18/2011
Allo! I still like how this one is going. I find the concept that each chapter is a different person's point of view to be wonderful. It gives the situation a bit of perspective, and allows for more creativity in the writing. It also makes the story fun to read, as I like to try to read a character's thoughts and dialogue in his or her voice from the show.
Anyway, can't wait to finish reading. Keep up the great work!
| Riku Murasaki chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
Don't worry. For being "insomnia-induced", this seems to be going pretty well.
| Kohaku Koneko chapter 8 . 1/3/2011
Takayoshi's story made me cry too... ;;