|Reviews for These Mortal Bones: Against My Body Set|
| tjadis chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
I love the spare prose in this, and the dynamics between Jarin and Tabris. The fact that he manages to see past what she is now to what she was, and what she needs from him...lovely.
| Shakespira chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
You convey so much with such few words, just a subtle shading. This: "Hot skin, rough scars; cold metal" conveys so much and actually made me tear up. You are a very gifted story teller.
| Witchy Bee chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
This is as brilliantly written as your first story. You have true talent. I love how you bring everything to life with subtle detail. Very beautiful and realistic.
| Nightsfury chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
I really like this. You pack so much story into so few words.
| Ygrain33 chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Yet another perfectly convincing piece. Excellent!