|Reviews for The Prince Of Orange Star|
| dld51 chapter 14 . 3/22/2020
Awesome story. If you are still out there. Please come back and continue this story.
| ChronoMitsurugi chapter 4 . 8/1/2018
(Her life was public enough, the most amount of privacy she had was in school, she wanted to keep that going.)
Wow, what a fucking hypocrite.
Love the story so far.
| Luna chapter 15 . 2/2/2018
*binge reads chapters 1-15*
*finishes chapter 15*
*looks at publication date*
| zfj chapter 1 . 11/22/2016
Nice story you got. I like how the story is centered around the Ox Kingdom. You did manage to hit my biggest pet peeve in DBZ fanfics, and that is Americanizing it using Christopher Columbus and whatever. It's in its own AU, not on real earth, but of course it's your fanfic, so who am I to judge *sigh*. But, overlooking that, it's a great story. Love the Gohan videl romance! Thanks for such a good read. It's sad that you haven't updated in 4 years :( hope you update soon!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/17/2016
| gabelou1991 chapter 15 . 4/30/2016
J'aime bien continu.
| Ronden Kiagre chapter 4 . 1/14/2016
Videl has clearly never seen professional Kendo.
| Ronden Kiagre chapter 2 . 1/14/2016
I like the fact that unlike so many people, including Mr Toriyama, you remembered that the ox kingdom exists. However, just fair warning, the Christopher Columbus thing might seriously piss some people off. They may not like to talk about it in the schools here in America, but I'm not exaggerating at all when I say he gave Hitler a run for his money as one of the worst people ever. I've read excerpts from the journals of several people who participated in the conquest of Dominica, and it was just about as fucked up (and even slightly more so at times) than the stuff in the Holocaust memoirs the made us read in tenth grade English class. Which by the way, kind of invalidates any "it's not school-appropriate" defense, even before you account for the fact that that argument still doesn't excuse the fact that we praise him as a national hero. Honestly, you should look it up yourself, it's kind of hilarious how mind-bogglingly inaccurate the stuff they say about him in school is, and there's far to much stuff to cover in just this one message. A good starting point is the History Buffs YouTube review of the movie 1492: Conquest of Paridise. The guy who runs the channel specializes in comparing historical films to the actual history they're based on, and he's quite thorough in his reasearch.
| rintindaff chapter 4 . 10/3/2015
I like how you added skye and jesse.
| dragonDraw chapter 15 . 5/14/2015
awesome story i cant wait to read more
| rrm232 chapter 15 . 3/8/2015
Please update the story it is really interesting.
| Mr.Son chapter 15 . 1/14/2015
Rrrrrrrr y u no update it u leave us on a cliffhanger!,!,!,!,!,!l!lL,L,,!,!,!,
| NatNicole chapter 2 . 8/20/2014
And it just keeps getting better and better. I especially like how Gohan's not around Erasa, Videl & Sharpner all the time like in most high school fics. By the way, what does Vegeta think of Gohan being a Prince to humans?
| NatNicole chapter 1 . 8/20/2014
Yup, very cool fic so far. Wonder why Gohan's royal sgatus wasn't even mentioned in canon?
| Gosh darnit chapter 15 . 1/12/2014
Gosh darn it!
There is no more!