|Reviews for Eternal Reverie|
| AkiiHotaru chapter 3 . 8/12/2012
...I assume that Chesster is based on a certain annoying Okami character? XD Lovely and exciting story and i know you already updated a lot... but i had to make some comment about the Ushiwaka reference XD
| Kitsune chapter 19 . 1/14/2012
Love reading Gokuganryu tales! Just to help with a few discrepancies, Mego and Masamune are about 1-2 years apart. Based on my extensive research, Masamune was born in 1566-7 and Megohime is 1968. It turns out that Megohime is the same age as Kojiro who lost his life in a struggle for head of the Date clan sometime between Masamune being 13-18 years old. Details are iffy but Masamune killed him. Hope this helps.
| Mocca-Marocchi chapter 32 . 1/3/2012
Shien's end reminds me of Kagura's from Inuyasha; their spirits become wind.
That boy must have dealt with so many kinds of spirit... *glares at Yuuki*
Hmm... Can't wait to see Yuuki, Ren, and Yin back in action!
| Mocca surprised chapter 31 . 12/23/2011
Hmm... Another female youkai? I hope she won't be as weak as Jorogumo (was it her name? I forget...).
Too bad Gracia and Ranmaru don't appear here...
I can't wait for the next chapter!
PS: I don't know Nobunaga has some ability to sense youkai... Is it because he's "The Demon King"?
| Mocca surprised chapter 30 . 12/23/2011
Bwah! Kirain saya udah baca chap ini... Ternyata belum .
Hoo... Rupanya ada lagi yang pake bantuan youkai, ya? Bakal seru, nih~
Saya pengen lihat Ran dan Gracia lagii~
| Mocca-Marocchi chapter 29 . 11/19/2011
Another OC! This time is a villain! XDD I wonder how she looks like~
The peasant of Ikko-Ikki? Do they have any connection to the peasants of Ikkishu? In Sengoku Basara, the Ikkishu peasants are led by a little girl named Itsuki. Itsuki is a fictional character, but I don't know whether Ikkishu peasants are fictional or not.
Ranmaru's ability and Motochika's rebellious nature are interesting. Can't wait for the next chap!
| Mocca lagi galauu chapter 28 . 11/19/2011
Nice chap~ I love to see Geki laughing and Nure making another friend~ I wonder what will happen with Nure and Yuuki .
Ranmaru with make up? I want to see it! Can I find the pic online?
I don't know Ren can be that wise! _
Alrite, to the next chap~
| SMA masih terkapar chapter 29 . 11/6/2011
Man, how could I say?
SAYA SENENG CARA MOTOCHIKA HADIR~ wd
Saya tinggal kasih tau adik perempuan saya soalkehadirannya abis pulang dari kampung 8D
Anyway, kaget sih saya kalau itu bakalan sama Kenyoo 0_0 (baca Lupa) okay, can't wait for more chapst~
| SMA terkapar chapter 28 . 11/6/2011
HIIItlama sudah saya tak meripiew~ kangen ? *buagh*
Btw, asli, saya seneng banget chap ini xDD YuukixNure forever~
Btw, Gracia sama ranmaru. Masalah hairpin itu renfrence ssma SW3 empierskan (belum mainin sih)
Nice,Can't wait for moret~
| Mocca chapter 27 . 7/31/2011
Nice closing before the hiatus~
Nice fight! I'm surprised when I know that Yomikage isn't evil... .
Well, about my fascination to YIN's childish side, it is because his childish side reminds me of my dearest Ryuutaros... *knocked down*
Come to think about it, Ren also reminds me of Momotaros as well, since he keeps calling others "Baka" *knocked down once again*
Last but not the least, I'm so happy that Trickster-san appears!
Update! (but take your time~)
| Moccapyon chapter 26 . 7/23/2011
Hee... I don't know Kai isn't a ninja... My bad .
I like the scene when YIN is playing shiritori with the children *LOL* In fact, I always like the times when YIN's childish side is exposed. I bet you've known the reason~
I can't believe Jorogumo is defeated that easily! . Maybe she's only good at seducing men... *stabbed by Jorogumo*
The final boss has appeared! Let's prepare for another battle! Seriously, reading ER makes me feel as if I'm playing RPG games! It's really fun! XDD
| Mocca-Marocchi chapter 25 . 7/15/2011
Well, about YIN, I say he's getting more similar with Ryuutaros because he's just inherited another Ryuutaros' nickname (which is "Hanatare kouzou"). It's just a joke, though. *LOL*
Anyway, Byaku's battle scene is epic! I hope it'll make his existence harder to forget~ *LOL* The female ninjas' scene is also good. I wonder if Byaku and the ninjas will form a tag team... How will it be?
Don't worry. You've done a great job to maintain this fic safe enough to be rated "T"! XDD
| Mocca-Marocchi chapter 24 . 7/14/2011
Araa... YIN is getting more similar with Ryuutaros this time~ Nyaha~ Too bad he isn't the one who says the catchphrase!
How can Yuuki withstand such cold water? . He's really something...
YIN drinks the Dan by his own will, right? Why he keeps blaming the mystics regarding his immortality, then?
I also enjoy seeing Yuuki when he is being called Okama! That's the risk of crossdressing! *LOL* Hope you enjoy your new nickname, Yuuki~
The last part of this chap really reminds me of Fatal Frame Series! .
| Pyro males login LAGI chapter 24 . 7/12/2011
GROAAAAARRRRRRR! TERNYAT SUNGGUHAN KOJURO NGGAK EKSIS! *mewek2 gaje abis itu dibunuh*. Tapi nggak apa~ saya puas dengan chap ini, apalagi pembukaannya pas Yuuki lagi meditasi sekaligus mandi itu gokil abizzz~ Lagian saya juga udah nggak nyabar menunggu aksi2 Yuuki yang cs-an sama Yin Long sekarang~~~ WAKAKAKAKA!
Neeway, saya mau ngasih tau sesuatu doank~ ada sebuah kalimat seperti ini: "Back in my homeland of China, bandits and other criminals is seen as a menace that needs to be rid off." Sebenernya saya nggak ngerti juga Yuuki memaksudkan ini pas zaman kapan. Tapi di zaman dinasti Han dan seterusnya, pas Gaibang mulai bermunculan, kadang Gaibang juga bisa jadi kayak bandit getu yang nyolong dari orang2 kaya (bahkan bisa juga jadi pembunuh bayaran untuk membunuh penjahat). Yahhh... kira2 kayak Robin Hood getu. Tapi mereka juga melakukan dengan 'honor and respect' (meski tetep aja merampok dan membunuh tuh salah~) sehingga nggak harus dimusnahkan... getu...
Wah, di chap ini saya menemukan sifat Yin Long yang ternyata bisa takut juga~~~ ohohohohoho~ saya baru tau Yin Long kalo takut reaksinya bisa extreme juga~ XDDDD Dan saya seneng juga pas liat ada POVnya Yin Long~~~ XDDDD moga2 ntar di chap2 berikutnya ada POVnya Yuuki juga~~~ XDDDD
| Pyro males login chapter 23 . 7/12/2011
Kwwwwwwuuuuuuueeeeeren~~~~~~ Action scenenya aseeek~ Cuma sebagai saran aja, bagaimana kalo anda nambah beberapa dialog? soalnya pertarungan tanpa dialog bikin agak garink~ dan apalagi kalo paragrafnya panjang2~ bisa tambah bingung... _
Jujur sekarang saya agak bingung... sebenernya antagonist di cerita ini itu para Jester ato Ying Dao, Yakumo, dan Strom Trio, sih? a Yahhh... nggak masalah... saya tunggu aja~~~
WHAT? WHAT? WHAT? Kojuro nggak akan eksis lagi? TIDDDDOOOOOOAAAAAKKKKK! *nangis2 alay abis itu dibunuh*