Reviews for Sweet Deception
KyoREQUIEM chapter 8 . 2/18
An epileptic emu having a fit? Really?

...Your sense of humor gets better with every chapter. XDD
Love you, dear author.
KyoREQUIEM chapter 7 . 2/18
...Josef Nazareth and Mary Virginia XDDDDDDDD
I am DED
TwinSanity95 chapter 12 . 4/14/2014
The part where zero turned human was confusing along with where kaname talked about him turning back. Why was he human in the first place and how did he know he was gonna go back. Also he then bit kaname with his fangs but it was jyst saying he was fucking a human
Mink Mother chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
Its nice to see that picking my brain turned into a weird and wonderful story.

Good Job, Good job cub keep up the good work.
Cellobabe182 chapter 13 . 3/26/2012
And I'm back to tell you how much I LOVE this freaking story! I love, love, love, love, love, love, love, love it! I love your original characters. I love the storyline. I love the way you portrayed Kaname, Zero and Yuuki. I love everything about this story. And I'm so shocked to know that it came from a parody of the anime. Of course, that does explain a lot of the humor in it. But I still love this story. I love the way that Tsuki asks if he has to explain the unicorns and griffons again, as though they're a substitute for the birds and the bees. I love all the references to you made about Zero being so far in the closet he's going to discover Narnia. Everything about Tsuki was awesome. I was shocked, SHOCKED to know that you hated him. I thought he was brilliantly created from the first time we met him. I know that OCs aren't usually very well liked, but these OCs are AMAZING! Well, I'm off to read the other stories you have of these awesome OCs, and I can't wait to see what else you come up with for them! xxx Cellobabe182
Cellobabe182 chapter 8 . 3/26/2012
Holy sweet Jeebus! I told myself that I would review this story at the last chapter. But I couldn't stop myself! I had to let you know this chapter was hilarious! I know everyone else has said it before, but I seriously could not stop laughing. Even now I'm still laughing! I love the devil, and his son and the hell that Kaname, and Zero are going through just to get together. This is really one of the best stories I have ever read in the Vampire Knight fandom, and I'm really looking forward to the rest of the chapters. You'll hear from me again, and soon! xxx Cellobabe182
sweir chapter 8 . 1/18/2012
omg omg omg lmao i loved it this chapter was soo freaking funny lmao very very nice job
Bearabbitalice chapter 13 . 10/9/2011
Awww that was so sweet. / I love the way you wrote what Zero was feeling and the whole Tsuki character is awesome! :DD This is one of the best KaZe stories I've read. : )
xX-KiryuSama-Xx chapter 13 . 7/27/2011
That was great, and totally funny. I absolutely loved the last two chapters especially with the part of Zero getting pregnant in the end.

Tsuki was really funny especially in one of the chapters when he was making comments about the chairman's cooking and I'm glad he and Yuki ended up together (I knew they would after the first time they met).

I felt bad for Zero at the beginning when he was being messed with, but it was a happy end. He and Kaname deserve each other!Great job:D
ElheiM chapter 13 . 3/28/2011
yipeeee! There's more sequels to come of our crazy families gyahaha! I enjoyed this chap esp the fcked up xmas decors lolz
Last night's pizza chapter 13 . 3/28/2011
Yes, my name is like that! It will always haunt you!

Anyways, I hate the fact that this story has come to an end but I love the fact that you left if off with Zero still being pregnant. I don’t know if you’re going to use that as the basis for the next story. But with a name like Sweet Decoy, I doubt it!

I know I’ve said it before but I really, really, really did love this story. There were so many classic moments of Tsuki. The sweetness between him and Yuuki. Plus the raw passion between Kaname and Zero. You submerged us into your world where OCs are actually decent characters and not the full focus of the story. I do hope to find out more about Tsuki’s past but I’m grateful to FINALLY know about Constance. It was really upsetting but I’m really glad that it won’t happen to Yuuki, as well.

And how does one send out 400, 17983 Christmas cards? Who did he send them to, just random strangers? That wouldn’t be surprising, actually. It was a good thing that he paid Kaname back because I doubt that would’ve been cheap! I hope there are more little childish antics like that in the sequels. I can’t wait to see what kind of mischief the children get into! Especially Tsuki and Yuuki’s. Half vampire and half demon…Those kids never stood a chance!

Well, I leave it here and hold my breath for the first chapter of Sweet Decoy. I also can’t wait to see what names you’ve come up with. So thanks for this awesome story. It sucks that I have to emerge now but I know that when Sweet Decoy is up, we’ll all be dragged back down and I can’t wait for that.

Alexia-09 chapter 13 . 3/28/2011

Well, it’s upsetting to know that this will be my final review on this story. But I really can’t wait for the sequels and you know I’ll be floating around, waiting for them!

The epilogue was sweet, in a twisted way. I would’ve love to have seen Yuuki’s reaction to the proposal. Seeing Zero with a pregnant belly was cute and I can’t wait until Yuuki has her own children. I bet she would be a great mother. I’m really interested in what kind of a father Tsuki will be, though. I get the feeling that he’ll probably praise his kids for all the wrong things.

I loved everything that Tsuki did with the decorations and what he did to Zero to “keep the hunter in shape”. He’s such an asshole at times. But you know he wouldn’t do anything to really harm the kids. What’s a little smoke inhalation or the adrenaline of defusing a bomb? It’s all water under the bridge now.

The next story, Sweet Decoy has me curious. The name sounds ominous and I hope that the wedding goes smoothly. I don’t want to know what Tsuki would do if it didn’t. After all, that’s Yuuki’s special day and if it isn’t perfect, I’ll feel sorry for Kaname, Tsuki and Zero. No-one likes dealing with a hysterical woman. But knowing you, it will probably end happily. Hopefully with the birth of Tsuki and Yuuki’s children.

Well, can’t wait for those! And I’m sorry I wasn’t any help with the names but it’s good to know that you have them sorted out. I can’t wait to see what they call their children. So I hope that the first chapter of Sweet Decoy is up soon as you have me hanging onto the edge of my seat already. Who or what is the decoy? Or are they using someone as a decoy to get to someone else? Too many questions already and that’s just because of the name! I’m eagerly awaiting Sweet Dictator as well!

So, hoping you post the next one soon! But in the meantime, thanks for all the kick ass laughs you’ve given us all with this story and I hope they continue on in the coming stories.


PS: Will the first chapter of Sweet Decoy be posted any time soon?
gladrialgolean chapter 11 . 3/28/2011
Somehow I get the feeling that even if they had had safe sex, tuski would have said zero was pregnant and that it was possible because it was in hell..:)
mpiedz chapter 13 . 3/28/2011
pla make sequel with Prego Zerorin...
Lovesucks01 chapter 13 . 3/27/2011
hehehe thats cute i hope they spend happy
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