|Reviews for Dollface|
| DepressionInTheFlesh chapter 4 . 11/10/2011
Duuuuuuuuuuuuuuude. That SO explains the walking dolls in the game!
| Grey-Jack chapter 4 . 2/24/2011
Hey man, and sorry for such a late review.
I rarely come on FF much.
Anyway, I like the premise of this and the back-story is good for her, you seem to have nailed the report idea well.
The writing quality is somewhat limited by the nature of the oral investigation, but it's good stuff none the less and of a high-quality.
Some things to consider though
- Date : It's set in 09, which I believe is some time after Doll-woman was killed by Ethan.
- A school report?...
Personally I'd prefer something more adult, like a young journalist or amateur police report. The idea of kids in Metro is a bit out-of-place and I'd imagine them succumbing to the Oro.
Plus, who'd raise a family in Metro!
But still, it fits well in the universe and I'd like to see more of this stuff if your going to keep doing it; maybe a police report of some of SKX's little-known victims mentioned in the 1st game? (Perhaps the ominously titled "Road-side Carver" or "Polaroid Killer")
Or something from SKX's journal on them?
Still, with tonnes of characters and events like the Oro, SKX, Bear attack at Black Lake Lodge there's tonnes of scope for your this style of writing and I hope you'll do more!