|Reviews for Dark Wings: Beginning of the End of Days|
| RulerOfCats chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
Next chapter please, there aren't that many stories like this. xD
| MystReviewer chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
Not a bad start, but i expect a lot more revealing in the next chapter. And you should try maybe adding more details like character appearance, mood, etc to really give a narrative effect.