Reviews for A Vampire's Secret
Makitsu Trinity chapter 2 . 8/2/2011
I really liked the opening. It was intriguing, however, you lost me as the second entry progressed, as it seems the narrator is simply using this to rant about the young man. Perhaps some depth, such as why she loves him so much? Why would Jesseabelle agree so easily to stand down and let the narrator take over? Do the girls have previous connections? Other than that, it was great!
mspiiii506 chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
this was awesom!
Renesmee of the Cullens chapter 2 . 4/3/2011
wow your charaectar really loves this justin guy u should write another story once u r done with the first story
Kayla chapter 2 . 4/2/2011
I like it :D
Renesmee of the Cullens chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
luv the story