Reviews for drowsy
ZeBarmyBookworm chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
Noooooo, Teddy! Why are you so blind! O: I am somewhat reminded of an experience of mine after reading this.

Oh, poor Luna :(

Gotta love the angst level though :D
FlyingPigMonkey chapter 1 . 10/14/2011
VERY relatable... D:
lowi chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
Lovely, mew, as always! ;) how c
I Like the Alphabet chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
I think I'll forever be without my Teddy :(. But it's my work in progress so, who knows! My friend is absolutely SURE that she won't find her Romeo/Teddy but I know she will since someone likes her! ;D
Morghen chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Urghhh, stupid Teddys! They're soooooooooo dumb sometimes!


Lily's tiredness was a really great way to show her heartbreak. I don't think I've ever read that kind of thing before so it was nice to read something new. Her feelings were easy for me to relate to. I agree that the lack of capitals gives more impact to the poem - good call.


"oh, silly metamorphmagus boy, did yo w?

she falls asleep a lot"

Favorite part! I loved how you called him metamorphmagus boy!

controlled climb chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
Ah, the feeling of exhaustion. Must admit, I've been feeling that a lot lately. Absolutely lovely, Mew. I think you captured this brilliantly and I adored the repetitive nature of poor Lily's tiredness with... well, everything.

Great job
jojor99 chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
Wake up Teddy boy! She's right under your nose.